Hi all! I just wrote my first ever story, and thought I would post it here at bc.
I would really appreciate any feedback you have!
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Winter Ribbons.

Here is a synopsis of the story:

Richard only wanted to get out of the snow. He never expected to end up in Emily’s wardrobe.

When a sudden winter storm strands Richard at the isolated rural home of a girl from university, he has no choice but to accept her help. His clothes are soaked, the power is out, and the roads are disappearing under snow.

Unfortunately for Richard, Emily has no men’s clothing to offer him.

What begins as an awkward necessity slowly turns into something softer, stranger, and more intimate. Ribbons, lace, makeup, dresses, and ballet slippers become part of a snowed-in world where embarrassment gives way to trust, laughter, and unexpected attraction.

Emily is warm, playful, and impossible to ignore. Richard is reserved, practical, and increasingly flustered by how easily her beautiful clothes seem to fit him.

As the storm keeps them trapped together, the line between accident and transformation begins to blur.

Winter Ribbons is an illustrated sweet feminization transformation romance featuring a reluctant but willing male lead, a kind and teasing heroine, cozy snowstorm intimacy, detailed makeover scenes, ballet imagery, and 41 full-color illustrations.

This story is romantic, visually rich, and kink-aware, but non-graphic.