That's fine,

it was an intersting bit but it did come out of no-where in a way.

It seems obvious a serium to *fix* the *genetic flaws* in TG and homosexuals was found and forcefully used to *cure* them. The science was flawed and it ended up making many of them superhuman, oops!

They fight back and beat their oppressors into the ground. With some background this could be a nice sci-fi thriller.

Never be afraid to post and them change your mind. Randalynn did it, so have others who's work I admire here. Sometimes you don't catch a mistake until late. At some point I will likely yank Sgt Joe , when I get the revised parts of the muti-thread story up.

I will read the revised story promptly once posted.

John in Wauwatosa