After being humiliated in the halls of Wilson High School, Ethan wants everyone to forget he ever existed. Who knew he'd get his wish?
by Leslie Moore
Long ago, I started uploading a new story, Complete Camouflage, to BigClosetR.us. After lots of fine constructive criticism from the readers, I realized it was a hot mess. I've rewritten the story and started uploading the chapters for you to read. I've renamed it Invisible. I've included a sketch of the proposed cover that's in the works from a wonderful woman I found on DeviantArt.com
I've spent the last months rewriting the words but leaving the essence the same. I hope you enjoy Invisible.
Thanks,
Leslie
P.S: I hope you help me make the book better by leaving a comment. After that, I'll publish it as a Kindle book on Amazon.
Comments
Invisible
Oh good, I liked the original story, despite the problems, and wondered if anything more would be done with it...
Agree
Dear Lisa,
Thanks for writing. I liked the story, too. But it became a hot mess and I needed to walk away and reframe it. That was a good thing because I ended up with a novel.
Love it
I am not familiar with the original. Looking forward to more.
Ask and ye shall be overwhelmed
Dear Valcyte,
Thank you for writing and I hope you enjoy Invisible