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Intriguing Story
I'm glad to see more of this intriguing story and can't help but wonder what the new Rod and Cissy are going to have to deal with, given the villainous Sweet clan! And it will be interesting to see what needing to be 'sorted out' will mean for our two lead characters. Never having been to the South I'm enjoying this little slice of life in the background you set the story too.
Good to see another chapter of this story Erin.
"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."
Thanks
I needed to take a break on writing comics after the con and this chapter was partly done. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Yay! Just needed Sorting.
LOL I'm happy to see more this magical hillbilly tale. Them Sweets sound like a mean bunch! Wonder if they need sorting too? LOL
Hugs!
Grover
Not sure they'd all fit in Cabin 5 :)
Though getting Susie Mack's personality into a younger body might be a hoot, she sounds like a piston, don't she? :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Getting Sorted -5- Family Business
Where are the Clampett'S
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Ozarks vs Crowley's Ridge
The Clampetts, according to the movie, are from the Ozarks, a bit to the west of where the Sortie Motel is located. According to the TV show, the Jed and his clan were from Tennessee. :) I'm from Crowley's Ridge myself, a bit to the north of where Sortie is supposed to be.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Don't We All?
Don't we all need sorting out? I do! I do!
It sounds like Cissy and Rod might be a bit confused about who they are and who they used to be. This is so much fun!
My eyes glazed over a little during the lengthy description of the Sweet clan but I'm still here. I can handle it.
I can't wait to see the meeting between Cissy and the magical trio. Please don't take so long between chapters! Please?
Thanks!
- Terry
I'll try
My aim is to do a chapter every week or two. There are several more chapters to go.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Happy
...that you're back to writing again. Thanks!
She was born for all the wrong reasons but grew up for all the right ones.
Con grande amore e di affetto, Andrea Lena
Love, Andrea Lena
Thanks. :)
I'm happy about it too. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Great descriptive writing...
Erin! Really well done. I picked this up mid-stream and am going to enjoy going back to the beginning.
Thanks!
-A
Glad you enjoyed it
Being descriptive while using details to advance the story is one of the most difficult things to do in writing. It's easy to move things with dialog but much harder to do it with description. I had a lot of fun writing this, though if I ever turn this into a for pay book, I'll probably have to shorten it.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Partially Sorted
Erin,
It appears Rod and Sissy are partially sorted, but I think the Sweets have a long way to go in the sortin' out department. But if anyone can sort them out I'm sure it's you.
Uht we hil koggam dax," said Old Joe.
"What happens next? " Millie clarified.
As always,
Dru
As always,
Dru
My intent is to have another chapter ready in a week or so
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Please tell me
that you'll come back and finish this story some day! It's too good to just stop at this point!
Cheers
Zapper