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Best Served Cold
Another great chapter from for wonderfully creative mind KUDOS I love you stories RICHIE2
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The Center: Best Served Cold Part-10
Ok, so is Dekker anywhere around? Or has Declan and Jasmine been gaslighting her and Dekker is either dead, or caught?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Dekker
Nope...no Dekker. They were partially gaslighting her...more info. will be revealed in the next chapter.
As if...
... my nails are going to survive that long, hanging on this nice cliff of yours... reminds me of someone else showing this 'nasty' habit now and then ;)
Good one ;)
Interesting...
Declan's allowed Becca to escape on at least one previous occasion when they've met, so I'm guessing he's got a specific reason for going to all this subterfuge and planning to get hold of her. Barry may have been involved - after all, he did initially work for Declan at Section Four (allegedly unknowingly) before Trish sent him the schematics of the BMC so allowing him to produce the frager and initiate the breakout, he's got the computer skills to set up the fake bank transfers, he did appear to deliver Becca into the hands of Jasmine & co. - then again, we may have been fed kippers (red herrings) and something else is going on.
So, if Jasmine's an emerged, she could be a dominator, or she could be more subtle, targeting a subconscious "Trust me" message at Becca.
It'll be interesting to find out what Declan's motivations are. Daddy's original reason for setting up The Syndicate was to find a cure; then it became super soldier - but Declan was pursuing his own agenda. If Barry was involved it could lead to the scary scenario whereby the breakout was planned by Declan - after all, if he managed to dispose of the original Zero and take his place without anyone realising, who knows what he's capable of...
As for Dekker, it wouldn't surprise me if Declan's already bumped him off and is (unbeknown to Daddy) the person really in charge of Facility X.
There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Ah, so Declan is the one
Ah, so Declan is the one currently pulling all the strings in this twisted and messed up little play? What is going to happen when the others find Becca missing, as I am sure they will notice something wrong when she doesn't get back to them in club in a reasonable time.
Damn cliffhangers! Top notch
Damn cliffhangers!
Top notch chapter, but you warned us so it's my fault for reading...GAH!
Lots of interesting things going on. Barry bites, by the way.
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Cliffhangers
Cliffhangers are a love/hate thing for me. I absolutely love writing them but I hate it when my favorite shows or stories end with them. Hopefully I won't make everyone wait too long for the next chapter this time...I've already written five pages of it. So keep your fingers crossed, maybe it'll be up by tomorrow.
Miraculous ?
Wow, keeping ones fingers crossed while hanging from a cliff by the nails ? This, I gotta see ;)
Hoo!
It's been a shell game all along with the Dekker thing. Nice touch using Becca's hate for the man to pull her in, by the way.
I won't complain about the cliff hanger. I'm sure you understand why. lol.
Good chapter, my friend.
Maggie
Barry's the traitor thats
Barry's the traitor thats seemed obvious to me. If he isn't he is supremely incompetent. Breaking up in the middle of a mission? Either stupid or traitor.
There are some things I don't undetstand though. Why let an emotionally unstable person lead a team into danger? Why didn't she investigate the notes pointing out that 'he's a liar'? Why isn't there any protection against telepaths? These things bother me but the story is too exciting to let it stop me reading.
Oh yes, what happened to Emma?
Good Points
They weren't expecting danger...this was a routine missions...find a girl and get her to tell them where her father was. I'm not sure about the notes...stay tuned for that. The telepath thing seems to be a hot topic for this story. I go back to my early explanation a few sentences ago...they were only there to investigate a girl, they weren't expecting any trouble. Now they know and they'll come more prepared for it.
Emma's whereabouts will be explained in the next chapter...which should be coming in a few minutes as soon as I finish typing this actually.
You know....
I suspected Jasmine, but I got distracted by her name thinking she might be the American with the English accent in Melanies story. But then I remembered Jasmine was in Tester.which was too long ago. Then there is the girl who has been giving Becca crap at the Center who is acting like the Center's Jasmine. She could be the mole. But it's still too simple as is my main thought.
Screw it I'll say it, Barry. So we have Barry, and the new version of the Center's Jasmine. Those are my choices. Argh!
Wil
Aine
How stupid does Becxa have to be
Just how stupid does Becca have to be not to realize she isn't playing some online spy game? That what they're doing is not a game, that every time she doesn't concentrate on the mission it goes in the toilet. Just as it's done now.
When they get out of this, Becca needs to be grounded. No more missions. No more being in charge of anything but when she needs a toilet.
Mrs. Fine needs to give Becca a choice, spill her guts, all of them, to Dr. Tipps or get out. They can no longer have her screwing up and putting the team in danger.
Now the others will have to find her and Emma, and get them out plus put Declan down. Enough of her bravado is enough.
Others have feelings too.