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A different Approach
We are definitely seeing things from a bit different perspective. It will certainly be interesting when things are broken to mom, then dad, then brother. This should be a lot of fun seeing how you get from point boy to point girl.
Portia
"I am female.â€
A good moment, when you can see it in yourself.
One Word and One Year - Part 1 of 8
How will everybody react to the revelation?
May Your Light Forever Shine
Gentle
I love the quiet and gentle way you allow your characters work their way through the process of coming to an understanding of there true nature. It is difficult being female from birth but having to upend years of conditioned thinking and actions having to bust out of a mold that just does not fit. That may be a bit harder from my perspective.
Great story and I am looking forward to the treat of reading the rest.
Huggles
Misha
With those with open eyes the world reads like a book
It's the little things
My female friends and I discuss men that we know and you're right; they're a different breed. Not lesser or greater, just different.
It feels wonderful to be included in conversations I can relate to.
Thank you, Karin. Very perceptive and a great jumping-off point for a new story.
S.
Crazy...
But this was the biggest laugh I've had in months -- had to stop reading until it subsided...
“... but it was your hand.â€
“Strange thing; I’ve got one on the end of the other arm, too.â€
Doesn't look nearly as good out of context. Anyway, really good conversation; looking forward to more of the story.
Eric
Thanks Karin
I'm looking forward to the rest of this new story.
Funny
You did such a great job with this dialogue. It was both funny and touching. Your light touch as Taylor helped Mark peel away those blinders, was very well done. Other author's efforts tend to come across as nearly forced fem, but not this one.
Well done!
hugs
Grover
So a new Jem for us all
Thank you Karen for starting a new story, it has some nice twists and turns that should become a very real group of people in a very short time. I love your characters, and how they find ways to relate to the world and people around them, so keep them coming and I and many others to be sure, will keep reading, and enjoying what you write.
Draflow
Unlike your other stories,
Unlike your other stories, the character of this one is in the early stage of discovery and is still unsure about his/her identity, so the internal tension adds an exciting element to the story. I'm also loving the wit and humor. I found myself smiling throughout because of the funny dialogue. Thanks!
Thanks again Karin
It's always good to see a new Karin Bishop story and this one is starting out just perfectly. The moment Mark discovered his true self was just precious. Looking in that mirror and finding a girl staring back, perfect. I hope his family sees him the same way too.
Mandy