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Another good one Bailey.
How do you do it? Your characters are so real that you can feel what they do. Amazing.
Maggie
Thanks Maggie:)
I guess I just actually try to picture the characters like real people sort of role play it out between myself and the screen if that makes any sense.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey Summers
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Shayne must return to her family to tie up the loose ends. I shall guard her if necessary. If Steven doesn't accept his sister and tries to hurt her in any way, then his body will accept the business end of my sword... >_>
*Narrows her eyes very dangerously and holds said sword up high*
Steven is not likely going to be decent to Shayne.
He will really not take well to her bringing Chris home.
*Big Huggles and scratches.*
Bailey Summers
Steven?
Met Chris. :) May the good lord make him truly thankful for what he's about to receive.
I don't know what to say Bailey except to please keep writing!
hugs
Grover
I have things planned Grover:)
The whole Steven and Chris thing has a definite thing there in my head right now. #rd part's well underway:) Thanks for the support!
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Bailey Summers
Great Story Bailey
I do have a serious concern about one thing. No spoiler here.
Portia
There's a teaser that's enough right?
I'm glad that you're enjoying this:)
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Bailey Summers
I'm really liking this one.
It's gonna be interesting to see how Shayne handles going back to the place where she was so badly mistreated.
Good too, to see her find someone decent. Her life has been pretty much a mess and very much like what too many other "girls" have to deal with just to be who and what they are.
Nicely done and well written.
hugs and Happy Holidays,
Catherine Linda Michel
As a T-woman, I do have a Y chromosome... it's just in cursive, pink script.
That's right where I was going for Cathy:)
It is what so many have gone through and that's part of what I wanted to get in this along with touching on the stuff Chris has gone through too and family, new loves, old wounds and all those things.
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Bailey Summers
Sniffle sniffle.....
Nice Bailey! Shayne & Chris spooning, happy happy joy joy! What a nice warm feeling that must be. Please please, more please? (Hugs) Taarpa
Curled up together, just being held...really nice.
There's more in the works right now got a great start on the 3rd part.
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Bailey Summers
so...
mom wants to see her, brother is a nut bag, other brother may have grown up have to wait an see, one sister may still be a cunt, other sister wants to see her (maybe could use a relocation in her life) an a unknown uncle. looks like a big ol' pot of family stew you got going.
great chapter, thanks
Yep that's about it:)
There's enough there going on right?
*Hugs and Howls*
Bailey Summers
"when Chris smiles it’s…It’s smile-porn."
giggle. Never seen a smile like that, but sounds good to me.
"Smile-porn." When they smile and it's sooo melting you inside.
And it's warm and sexy and when you see it you want more of that smile from them.
*Great Big Angel Hugs*
Bailey A Proud Big Brother.
Bailey Summers
Real enough to cause an attack of PTSD.
geeze, from personal experience, this is so real, to me at least. PTSD from home, yes I can relate. He used to tell me he was gonna kill me and I thought he did a few times.
God, I want to be held and kissed and hugged. Not sex, not right away at least. I'll die never having known that, and it can't be too soon.
G
Sorry Gwen I didn't mean to bring up the lonely hurts:(
I was trying to go with the good side of the experience for the readers here with this.
*Very Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
****Giggling****
I hope I can find Mr.Right or Mrs.Right 1 day.But I do know where Shayne is coming from about all the family stuff & I know how much it HURT'S inside 2 this day.
Signed Kagome(Sweet-Girl87)
Thanks SweetGirl-87:)
That's really what I've been going for I mean it's hardly a new story for so many but still one that can be touched on and add to the RL feel for things.
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Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Her family seems to attract men who are ....
asses.
Though I think she's found a keeper.
her shi* brother will not come out of this in one piece unless it is in a body bag. Can't tell yet about the older *cougar* sister.
What the repentant sister said confused me. She said after dad lost his job he started drinking a lot more and getting mean. So why try and find hie *son*, spend all that money he no longer had?
Or did he near the end have an epihany and decide to make amends . If not for himself but for the wife? Yet no one EVER turned them selves into the police as a chld abuser/child abandoner. How can a dead man make it up to her assuming he meant well and not just a sick attempt to hurt her.
And the brother in law is almost worse.
Another gritty tale.
Nice.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Yeah Shayne's family is messed up.
But many women raised in a bad relationship household tend to end up with problems themselves. Stacy really hasn't thought about if why her dad was spending money to find her if he was broke. Shayne would never believe it'd be to make up to her.
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Bailey Summers
Wal Mart, GRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!
I used to work for that Crappy Store. I say crappy only because I am trying to be nice too!
“Oh company policy if there’s a death in the immediate family then they’ll give you a day of mourning with pay. I know a single day’s not much but…†He shrugged.
“Hey it’s better than nothing.†It’s one of the things I do like about it here that they are actually pretty good as far as a chain store goes for stuff. They’re so much better than working for slum lord employers like Wall-Mart.
Trust me Viv, they're just as bad here in Canada.
Go to the next two towns and the Wall-Virus is there. It'd be here too but the University here is that much in control of the town THEY don't want the competition.
*Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Emotional
A really emotional chapter. *sniffle* I loved the conversation between Shayne and Stacey in particular.
Great job as always Bailey.
"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."
Getting even some family back is emotional:)
Especially since you think that they've written you off.
*Great Big Hugs.*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
This story...
Is so difficult for me to read. But I feel like I have to.
I'm speechless.
Peace!
Cindilee
Thanks Cindilee:)
There some stuff here that's hard for a lot of people but sooo glad that you get it.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
It’s smile-porn
Like that one a lot, lovely story. Needed something sweet tonight and this fit the bill nicely.
*hugs*
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
I know I love that term too:)
I love getting those smiles too with the dreamy eyes and the curling toes:)
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
o. m. g....
I am soooo in love. His last name isn't Hemsworth is it? ;-)
Thanks for the yayness, hon!
*big hugs*
Jen
o. m. g....
I am soooo in love. His last name isn't Hemsworth is it? ;-)
Thanks for the yayness, hon!
*big hugs*
Jen
No...but He'd love the comparison though:)
Chris is a good guy though:)
*Big Hugs*
Bailey Summers