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WOW
Wow a great start for another D R U storiy Thanks Elsbeth looks like you found a home for your stories KUDOS on the story waiting for more chapters
THANKS RICHIE2
Thanks!!
Glad your liking the start of the story lots more to come :)
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
Second chances for some
Certainly hope to hear that the next foolish driver ends up having to make paid on their error. Those that can't concern themselves with following good sense should not be allowed on the road. The good doctor will be a loss to the hospital and the town if he can't be saved as he could have saved many lives and lessened the pain of others, but it seems he may receive a second life, but hopefully not at the loss of his memories. Painful memories can create great strengths for some when they are balanced with the memories of the happy joyful moments too.
Crash
Whats a little scary is I based that crash off a real life experience. Driving through the mountains in the snow, a car did just that. It was rather horrifying.
Thanks for reading
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
Agree
So many people drive like idiots. Unfortunately they tend to survive while killing innocents. Bad weather seems to bring out the worst in many drivers. Time to be extra careful.
Chris
interesting
very interesting.....to steal an old quote
Verrry interestink!
Totally wacko speculation ahead... you have been warned!
-- snicker --
So did the fairies evaluate his/her spirit and decide he needed to live? Or was there a split between his male human form and her fairy form?
And his, well her reminiscing about the wife is curious. Was the wife a pixy/fairy who gave up on their heritage over the love of this brave ex-army surgeon? Does he have pixy/fey blood in his heritage?
And why did the former army friend invite him? The new wife's name was odd. Is she from Southeast Asia and possibly conversant with magic and the spirits of the forest such as pixies?
Knowing he so loved his dead wife was this to ease his loneliness? Or... to give her a second chance at life?
Did the supposedly late wife leave him a giot of her pixxy magic which the accident triggered? Is she really dead?
Their not having children could be for mundane reasons. Or pixies and humans are incompatible. Or if they had had a child it likely would have been a magic user from birth and obviously NOT human? Thus she chose not to get pregnant.
Or has my speculation organ exploded?
Love to see where you taking this. And I see our powerful if a bit too powerful young pixy is involved.... again.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Not the author
BUT....part of this is right in the story....Being Army buddies from Vietnam era, they kept in touch. His wife is probably South Vietnamese since he spent time there. Not unheard of.He was invited when a trauma surgeon opening appeared. And since he was mooning and lost after the death of his wife, he accepted to get away from the memories and the Big City. The rest is very good speculation.
All well and true about...
military relations and all that, but I thought that the guy was either in theMarine Corps. or the Navy as a Corps. Man.
Peace be with you and Blessed be
I think your speculation
I think your speculation Organ has exploded :D
I don't see how this has much to do with his dead wife. She's dead, gone... I think the pixi has more to do with whom he saved. Why would the spirit of the forest (or whatever it is) snatch the soul of a random human about to die at their doorstep? I think that was a way to show their thanfulness for something, snatching his soul to give him a funny, happy life as a pixy, but that was kind of screwed up because his original body survived.
Well, I can't wait to see what will happen next. I wonder if they can coexist, or if he'll have to decide to live as himself or as Poppy.
Elsbeth, thank you for writing this captivating story,
Beyogi
Speculation
But its good speculation :) Thanks for reading, i'm happy your enjoying the story.
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
I wish Poppy the best.
May she finally have peace.
G
Elsbeth
you do have a way of grabbing your reader's attention with both hands. :)
hugs
Grover
Edit
PS:I as kinda tired when I read and first wrote this comment. My dyslexia does a number on words and my understanding at times. It looked liked Prizzi's Honor at first. I thought so they're bring in a Hit-Pixie to clean up things in the old town. :)
I think the deal here is he's not dead yet, just mostly dead. Heck he could really be brain dead, but since he's a Pixie now he still has a link to his old body. It'll be interesting if when he sleeps if SHE awakens/reappears. Does that make him a were-pixie? :)
Only mostly dead?
So does that mean we can expect to see Miracle Max sometime soon?
Cathy
As a T-woman, I do have a Y chromosome... it's just in cursive, pink script.
Oh! You know me
Oh so well! Well, Doc is in a place between traditional and true Death being perhaps brain dead. Who knows what the Magic Forest may make of that.
Hello my name is Lily the Pixie and you killed my ... :)
hugs
Grover
Pixie's Honor : Chapter 1
Will he split into his human and pixie form, choose one or the other, become a were pixie, or a fusion of pixie and human? Then he would look like his pixie self as a petite woman with his medical skills and pixie powers.
May Your Light Forever Shine
Interesting start
So Matthew / Poppy's now caught between two worlds: that of his usual life as a 60-something year old former Marine and Navy corpsman interrupted en-route to Skogshaven and a potential new life as a pixie called Poppy within the Skogshaven woodland.
I guess that as the story evolves we'll find out more about how the rare pixies that originate on earth, erm, originate. Given the diminutive size of pixies, I'm sceptical of the theory that Elaine was a pixie who assumed human form, but perhaps it's something like a combination of some fae blood in his ancestry combined with the overwhelming desire to protect combined with magic (perhaps residual wash from Lily's habit of spellcasting effort turned up to 11) combined with something else.
[EDIT] Also, something to watch out for in future chapters: who Joshua Chamberlain is/was - a name remembered by Poppy, but doesn't occur anywhere else either in the story or in Payter's gazeteer (which has already been updated with the characters from here!).
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Read about the Battle of Gettysburg
The Battle of Little Round Top on the second day of the three day battle and a unit from Maine.
A combination of smart orders on his part, cool discipline, some misunderstood orders he gave earlier added to by the *fog of war* and we got the *swinging gate* -- a maneuver right out of ancient warfare -- that totally whipped a Confederate attempt to flank the Union position.
Arguably the most single important engagement of the war. Certainly saved a lot of Union lives and contributed to the near destruction of R E Lee's Army of Virginia the next day at Pickett's Charge.
BTW Joshua Lawrence Chamberlin as a General took the formal surrender at Appomattox From General Gordon, was a five term governor of Maine and attended the 50th anniversary reunion at Gettysburg in 1913 a year or so before he died from complications from wounds suffered latter in the war.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Nice beginning
I always find that your stories have that edge of darkness and I find myself waiting for the worst. This is what happened when we were first introduced to Poppy who couldn't remember her name. I'll be waiting for more. :)
WOW!!!
Elsbeth, you've got me hook, line and sinker with this new story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter so I can read what happens next to Matt/Poppy. Please don't keep us waiting to long for the next chapter.
Hugs.
Yamara Jeanne
Thanks!!
I'm glad your liking the story, plenty more on the way.
*Hugs*
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
Interesting!!!!
So is Matt going to become Poppy? Not a bad result I could
enjoy being a pixie! And he will have his hearts desire to
become a female!! Lots of paths this story could take, looking
forward to finding out what it will be!!
Pamela
"how many cares one loses when one decides not to be
something, but someone" Coco Chanel
What a great start!
I am going to be up late tonight reading as much of this as I can. If the rest is as good as the beginning I won't get much rest till I'm done.
Chris