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“I can’t lose you"
the desperation of a father.
hopefully, he can live with the results ...
*hug*
Pap's story isn't over yet.
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I've been hoping you would continue this!
I love these characters and their so human motivations. "I can't lose you." The pure desperation in those four words ring out. I fear Pap has betrayed all he believes in to try and save Archie. That's love.
However, Archie is going to how to live with what just happened.
This is good stuff!
I hope that you can continue. *Fingers crossed!*
Hugs
Grover
Betrayal isn't love.....
Anyway you look at it, he's doing something against Archie's will.
When you do something to another adult against their will, it's not love. It's selfishness.
D. Eden
“Hier stehe ich; ich kann nicht anders. Gott helfe mir.”
Dum Vivimus, Vivamus
All I can say is...
Sometimes people do the exact worst thing, for all of the best reasons in the world.
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In terms of continuing...
Issue 5 already started with material I cut from Issue 4.
Hopefully it won't be so long in between posts this time.
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Please Do
Please continue this story. I'm really enjoying it. You gave me a nice, new universe buzz.
Thanks and kudos.
- Terry
I'm really glad...
That you're liking the story and the setting! Thank you!
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Well, I am waiting for the
Well, I am waiting for the next chapter. It is an interesting story, just sorry Archie has so much pain going on. That can ruin a perfectly good day.
As a friend of mine once said...
Part of the joy of being a writer is to create memorable characters and then torture them for fun and profit.
But to be serious for a moment, part of Archie's struggles come from my own chronic pain problems. It does suck.
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Wow Erica!
I had forgotten about this one. I wonder where Doc disappeared to? Leaving Archie standing there like that to fend for himself, not good! They are saying this Silvery stuff will cure Archie, but at what cost? Erica dear, please hurry back with more hon. Loving Hugs Talia
Hi hi
Thanks for remembering my little story! I'm over half-way done with the next chapter. I hope to have it posted sometime this weekend.
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Betrayal!
That is compounded suck for Kell. I read everything posted in a quick marathon and really like where you're going with this, but can't help but feel like maybe he should, you know, actually get something good happening?
Anyway, more approbation from me the transitions are very well done.
Thanks for sharing!
It ain't over till it's over,
And there is a lot happening we don't know the background to. It will take time, but we'll be filled in eventually.
Doc is around, somewhere. Just very busy at the moment.
We will...
definitely catch up with Doc and the rest of the Aegis Court at some point.
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