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“Let’s make it of here alive.”
sounds like a plan ...
Out
'Out' seems to have been left out of that last line in the story.
Whoops
Good catch, thanks!
-Tas
Voyage of The Dammed
I think Tas has been watching too much Doctor Who. This chapter reminds me of the Voyage of the Dammed confrontation between the Doctor and Max Capricorn.
"...All that banter, yet not a word wasted..."
This re-write was way better than the first version. Still a cliffhanger ...can't wait until next Saturday.
Doctor Who
Surprisingly enough, I've never watched Doctor Who, but I may very well look that specific one up just to see what you're talking about haha.
As much as this was also a cliffhanger, it was the end of a chapter and a natural cliffhanger instead of an artificial one like last time.
Glad you thought it was better :)
-Tas
Doctor Who - Voyage of the Dammed
Voyage of the Dammed had the highest audience of any Doctor Who episode. IMHO, this was the best Doctor Who episode ever!
My favorite line in this episode is when the Doctor told Max Capricorn (owner of the Titanic):
"You couldn't even sink the Titanic!"
(The episode is set on a large passenger liner (spaceship) called Titanic, which is hit by Asteroids).
I highly recommend this episode of Doctor Who. I also recommend the Fires of Pompeii. Both episodes were outstanding and Well worth watching.
Why I can't wait until next saturday
I just realized most of the people here are too young to understand what I ment when I said I couldn't wait until next Saturday.
Before your parents were a twinkle in their Father's eye, people (especially children) would eagerly wait to see the Saturday Matinee (at the local movie theatre) when the previous weeks cliffhanger would be resolved. Star Wars (the definitive movie of your generation) was inspired by the weekly serials Lukas watched when he was a kid.
Voyage of the Dammed Casualty Report
By the way, in Voyage of the Dammed, there were only four (4) survivors.
I'm Not Sure What They're Accomplishing...
...by waiting for something directly threatening to happen rather than making their move now, when they'd be acting instead of reacting, and might well have the element of surprise on their side. Assuming Nick's right, the best and perhaps only chance of any other mage or scientist surviving may be for our core group here to have some sort of rescue mission set up -- either that or a way to neutralize the guards -- both of which would be more likely with advance outside help than by summoning one entity when they're already under attack.
We don't know which side Arterian Dark is on. It's tempting to suggest that he set this whole thing in motion by yielding so readily to Nick -- especially since we've been told that he's usually a much better negotiator -- and then doing nothing to repress him once Nick's blackmail threat dissipated. (It may even go back further: since Nick's name was on the door when he arrived, Dark was presumably after him for a reason.) There's also the whole question as to where his daughter fits in.
If Dark thinks he's now as dispensable to the Illusive One as the rest of them are -- I'm guessing he does, and that he's right -- he's probably doing his best to create a Plan B here that he can edge his way into when the time comes.
Of course, we don't know who or what the summoning is actually going to bring. David's dead on Earth; Cariss is now Aria, and despite the last chapter, we don't know at this point whether a Silver Key can actually exist in the same instance -- even on Earth -- as the Black Keys who are doing the summoning here. In any case, when the summoning looks for David, is Aria going to be the most similar entity available? (And is it relevant that (unless I'm mistaken) the Illusive One placed a Yin-Yang symbol in the summoning square on the diagram?)
Eric
Doubt
With them spreading some doubt about the guards and other things, and the scientists being on good terms with the mages, I would not doubt that some of them hear the rumors and start thinking about them too.
Nice!
Nailed it in one :)
-Tas
Thoughts
Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't think about going offensive (meaning the characters didn't either). I addressed that in the next part, so not to worry :)
Arterian is sort of an unknown quantity at this point, partially because Arterian works only for what Arterian wants. That that happens to align with what the Illusive Man needed is simply a happy coincidence for Arterian. He does love his daughter, but he's also fairly hands off. What he's going to do next? Even I don't know that haha
I guess it was pretty obvious Nick was going to try summoning his friend wasn't it? You'll have to wait till next part to see if it works.
It is significant that the Illusive Man used those specific symbols, including the yin-yang, but I'm not going to give that one away unless you guess right ;)
As always, thanks for your long and informative comment, it really does help me :)
-Tas
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If they are successful in summoning Aria, I hope it doesn't happen in the middle of a fight with a boss!