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hmmmm
I love getting my Jem fix. Thanx Bailey. Always glad to see you post.*hugs*
quidquid sum ego, et omnia mea semper; Ego me.
alecia Snowfall
Glad to be posting.
Love that you're loving this!
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey Summers
Uh-oh...
Rayne's not usually late. Definitely not late without texting/calling Angel. I need to know what happens next!
~And so it goes...
That will be soon!
Definitely for the weekend reading.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey Summers
Something smells bad...it's
Something smells bad...it's been quiet for too long and the girls have gotten to at ease. Adam is going to make a mistake and it seems like the first signs are already there. I just hope that Carmen is smart enough to get the threats recorded, even if they aren't direct the fact that she has it on record can be used against the scumbag should something happen to her. He will panic and screw up, his kind always do.
I'm told STFU more times in a day than most people get told in a lifetime
Great comment and suggestions!
I've got a few things planned since folks have been sort of asking.
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Bailey Summers
The first rule of combat.......
No plan survives first contact with the enemy.
Second rule - anyone who isn't with us is a potential enemy. And yes, I know that's paranoid - but is it paranoid enough?
Third rule - we leave no one behind.
Rayne being late should be throwing up all sorts of alarms for both Angel and Mike. Both of them know better than to ignore that fact. Hence why Angel noticed the time.
This Bailey, this is one of my absolute favorite stories. Seeing it tonight truly brightened my day. Getting left hanging with that last line - that was just plain mean! Please, please, please don't leave me hanging too long!
Dallas
D. Eden
“Hier stehe ich; ich kann nicht anders. Gott helfe mir.”
Dum Vivimus, Vivamus
I thought...
...that the first rule of combat was that there are no rules.
Be kind to those who are unkind, tolerant toward those who treat you with intolerance, loving to those who withhold their love, and always smile through the pains of life.
sure there is
sure there is. Dallas forgot the true first rule of combat. Last one alive, wins.
quidquid sum ego, et omnia mea semper; Ego me.
alecia Snowfall
It's not decided/written yet as to getting that far.
But there's thoughts brewing as well as fresh coffee.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey Summers
We're definitely going to see rule 3.
Angel has noticed and she's more than worried.
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Bailey Summers
“We’re all in danger Angel"
they are, too.
I hope they can do something soon ...
Really digging Carmen as a character.
There's a lot there.
*Great Big Proud Angel Hugs*
Bailey Summers
HWWWW
Going back to my days as an underpaid and overworked photo-journalist, the first thing you learn is the 5Ws and the H. Who, what, when, where, how, and why. They kinda know who and they kinda know why, that still leaves three Ws and the H.
I can see this getting very nasty very quickly. They know that Rayne will go to the RCMP if they let her go. She'll be just a pawn on a chessboard and pawns are expendable. The bikers undoubtedly have members who would do the dirty work. And Adam might just get a thrill doing it himself. With Rayne they can get Angel, who can be used to get Remy. Brook is just a loose end, they can grab her and use that to get Mike.
But exactly who did the actual snatch is a good question. Adam ordered it, but was it the bikers or local talent. Whichever it was they'll soon find that Adam has a big piece of blackmail.
Shit, I wish I didn't have a such a good imagination, I know of too many ways for this to go fatally wrong.
If things go bad I can see Billy and Davey going scorched earth on the Marshalls.
I went outside once. The graphics weren' that great.
See this is why I love your comments Omega girl.
There's so much that I can see happening and there's always things you come up with that I haven't.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey Summers
Please don't hurt me.!
Bailey you might have Omega girl be a beta reader?
Not that you need any help on that front.
Peace and Hugs tmf
Ut oh
Is it bad or a cliff hanger?? Thanks for the new chapter