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Interesting!
You have written an interesting story with multiple twists and turns that ended on a positive note, yet, left you some wiggle room should you decide to add more chapters in the future. Well done!
Thank you
Thank you for the kind words.
It started with this boy's tee shirt that my son and I saw last week. The gist of it was that he could beat us at everything because we are losers.
I chuckled and said to my son that if you see someone stupid enough to advertise that and believe it too, change the game.
For example, I pointed out to my son that he could say to him, "You're right, in the race to be ugly, you win."
That birthed this story.
The Queen...
Bing-Dong the queen is dead, oh I mean she's locked up for a long time.
good
good
There's always someone smarter
Than a bully. Just let them do what they do best and let them destroy themselves. A nice tight plot with an excellent twist.
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Thank you for your kind observations
Thank you. Writing it was not exactly what I planned for this weekend.
My muse had me stop working on 'A Friend in Need' this weekend and forced me to write this story instead. She can be a bit forceful at times and tell me what to do and say. But, I seem to enjoy where she takes me and she knows it.
Au travail! ( Back to work! )
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Well if your muse is being a bully
You have the answer right here.
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My muse might be a bully, but ...
she keeps me entertained. ;-]
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Sometimes...
...the only way to BEAT a person at their own game is to purposely LOSE. Your story is a shining example of that, and I LOVED it. In the sequel, I hope Stella gets hers, his, and yes, even its due. (She can get the chair, be reincarnated and immediately get gassed, then be reincarnated again -- as a cat -- and be euthanized all nine times, and that STILL wouldn't pay off this psycho-bitch's karmic debt...)
-H
*Kisses Always*
Haylee V
Harcourt Fenton Mudd Elementary.
giggles.
Oh good!
I was wondering when someone would catch a few of my not so hidden references to the original Star Trek.
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A real sense of menace
The way everyone was reacting to Stella I thought she was going to be like that Twilight Zone kid, or maybe Charlie X, or the Squire of Gothos or old Liver Lips from the continuum (to drop a few Trek references of my own...); but her powers were more mundane. Good bit of misdirection there. Still she must have had something to get people to obey her like that. Strange little story, but good spooky fun...
~hugs, Veronica
for the axe had convinced them that because his handle
was made of wood he was one of them.
Squire of Gothos
I would say more Squire of Gothos at your service.
Yes, I confess. I am a Trekkie at heart.
This one was just so much fun to write too. I was in a such a silly mood.
It was also my way of poking fun at a few of the Femdom stories I read that can be just a little over the top.
Thanks for your awesome feedback. Always appreciated since they have inspired a few of my stories. ;-)
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