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nicely done
I found this story to be nice done. well constructed and put together. keeps you guessing what will happen. very nice ending, bad guy got what he deserved. keep up the good work.
robert
I really like your stories
You have great imagination. Iwish we could be neighbors, as we could be good friends,
Love this wonderful story
A short while ago i found your stories on this site by chance. Now every day i when i check-in on this site i look and hope to find another wonderful story by you, it makes my day to find a new story and as always it's a great story . Thank you
Arrr ye scurvy seadogs an' wenches!
Oh my gosh this has been such a fun Friday reading! Thank you for posting it, even if now i feel compelled to find pirate gold and tall, blonde Australians...
Thanks for a great story
I've not been around much lately because of a new job and a holiday in Norway. This is a great story to come back to, thank you ( and it's sooooo big!)
I wish I could find some gold like that.
Of course, I would want the curse broken immediately after the transformation. Rather not go through the whole curse.
How lovely.
A splendid tale of piracy, treasure and of course magic curses. It's great to simply let one's imagination be taken to impossible places and let the magic take over.
Thanks for the pleasure.
O’Braonain’s Gold
Very well written story.
I enjoyed it immensely.
Looking forward to more of your stories, they are very imaginative. This story did remind me of the Goonies; great job writing it.
Really loved this story,
Really loved this story, guess it is because of my 35% Irish heritage. Cursed gold for some reason always seems to figure into stories regarding Irish folks like Aine; either from pirates or "The Little People" and their pots of gold.
Great ending as well and a well deserved retribution for a very bad man named Wayne.
Too bad the two goons could not meet a similar fate, as they too deserved such.
makes me wonder how pirates
makes me wonder how pirates of the carribean dead mans chest would have went if this had been the curse instead of turning them into unkillable skeletons
Great lovely story
It sure is worth more than one kudo I can give.
Really bad scheduling!!!
Argh! Ye should have held this fine tale until SEPTEMBER 19TH!!!
Methinks there may be another September contest. Seems a shame for ye to miss the contest with your most fine yarn.
Yep, Wayne got what he deserved
It's a sad state of affairs when the terrible actions of a few brand the rest with the same guilt. This is a mistake, for it is only those committing the deed who are guilty. Hate and anger blinded Meagan to the point of removing all compassion she may have possessed, causing her to do something she only later regretted.
The problem with a curse is that it affects both the innocent and the guilty, with only the guilty getting their just reward. As what occurred to Wayne, a very deserving man.
Both Brain and Azacca were innocents with regards to the terrible ordeal suffered by Meagan and her crew, though Azacca did deserve the curse for what he attempted to do to Aine.
However, even though the curse was unfair, both discovered a better life after the transformation. Aine became more popular because of her looks, not something which would have occurred to Brian. And Haime found her love in the form of another considered an school outcast, she also escaped a horrible family life with the disappearance of Wayne. And Lesia, became popular because of the items found in the cave.
The lives of all four, and their families, changed because of a curse which was enacted 200 years ago. It's a shame for this to be the only way for these four to start being treated differently. To be treated with respect and dignity, as people who fit in with the rest of the students. This reversal in attitudes shows just how shallow the majority of students really are, how they only cared about how they were perceived by other students instead of doing what was right.
It may not have been intended, but a moral can be drawn from this story, several in fact.
This is another story which is well worth the time to read, and think about.
Others have feelings too.
A Creative Tale of Pirate Treasure!
Move over Anne Bonny and Mary Read! Casey, I loved how you expertly created and weaved a sad tale from the past of Megan O'Braonain, her daughter Aine, their cursed treasure into the present day story of Brian (then Aine), his friends and their families! Very clever, kudos hon!
Interesting story
This was an interesting pirate story and one I’ve read more than once.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
Moral to the story
Don't mess with the Irish! Great story!
It's a blessing that God gave
It's a blessing that God gave the Irish whiskey - else they'd rule the world.
I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.
Awesome Read!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! After Brian found the gold I had a feeling it was going in to a Goonies style story. Even though it had that feeling still, I'm glad it didn't.
Wil
Aine
Awesome Read!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! When Brian first found the gold, I thought it was going to be a Goonies style tale. Even though it kept that vibe, I'm glad it didn't.
Wil
Aine
Ahhh, takes me back
When I was in 7th ir 8th grade I read a book about a couple of kids finding a treasure. It had none of the romance of this story but equally captivating. I felt like a teen again reading this and what a wonderful gift you have, to be able to write a drama with such real characters that RL fades away.
>>> Kay