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The End?
Maybe not but it's the last chapter I'm planning to write now and it's a good place to leave the story.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
I've Enjoyed the Ride
It has been a nice story. I am sorry to see it end, but I see how it can end here. She has a future with her best friend. Thanks for sharing the story with us. I have enjoyed it.
Keep Smiling, Keep Writing
Teek
(Teek's Author Page)
I hope you can come back to it
this was such a NICE story, and honestly, I needed nice right now.
Sweet Story
Good place to end, sweet story
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
This was so fun!
The story line is quite medically plausible, not just wishful thinking.
Thank you
Gwen
Delightful!
Pete and Audrey are really cute together. I love the interplay and teasing.
More please
Please don’t stop it here. I wonder what their parents are going to say.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
A good place to pause
Thank you for providing this reader with an enjoyable interlude. I truly hope that you may find the future time to continue this sweet story .. matrix
Oh rats!
And here I sit all upset. sniff.. unfair!!
Love(d) it
a
alissa
What This Shows
Apart from being a lovely story it demonstrates that boys always have to catch up with girls in the maturity stakes, although Pete did a fairly good job for a boy!
Lots yet to cover
But at least Audrey still has her friend and a boy friend lol.
Love Samantha Renée Heart.
Dang!
I really enjoyed this story and really hate to see it end (although it does finish happily), as there is a lot of potential for continuing a very interesting tale.
Well...
I was driving down the freeway at noon, and a scene came to me. Audrey coming in to talk to her mother, she was all upset. The middle school has an indoor pool and they are going to have three weeks of swimming classes and she doesn't have a swimsuit. She's all upset because she doesn't know if she can find or wear a swimsuit that will keep anything from showing and she bursts into tears.
Hmm. So perhaps there is more of this story waiting to be told. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Yes, please!
I certainly hope so! This is one of my favorites stories ever. Audrey is a very compelling character, and her family and friend Pete are fun too.
This was a sweet story.
I would gladly read a continuation if you decide to pick up Audrey's story after skipping a few years in her life.
A stranger is just a friend that you haven't met yet.
I've thought about it
Nothing happening so far. :) Thanks for commenting.
Hugs.
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Wonderful Read
Thank you
ShadowCat
You're welcome
Now for the mean part. There's an epilog in the ebook version. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
I just discovered this story
Written with your customary flair, could you perhaps produce a second volume?
Angharad
Epilog
The ebook version has an epilog chapter. But I'm probably done with those characters. Sorry.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.