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Clearly, mom wants ...
... a daughter, but unlike the moms in many of these stories, she doesn't force or try to trick John or even high pressure him, just asks him to dress for pics and lets him decide; I can tell that if he had said no she would have been disappointed but would have respected his decision. There will be no feelings of shame or humiliation, no resentment of mom or distrust of women in general in this boy as he grows into a loving daughter and a fine, happy young lady, even if only part time ... or will it be only part time ??? Congrats on a fine story of the way a boy should be introduced to wonderful femininity.
My only negative, if it is, is that John sounded more like age 11 or 12 than nine.
"All the world really is a stage, darlings, so strut your stuff, have fun, and give the public a good show!" Miss Jezzi Belle at the end of each show
BE a lady!
A sweet story
I agree that nine was too young to be stuffing her bra or having teenage boys ogling her.
But nine did feel right for the amount of exploration she was doing, and her ability to pass.
My Cousin's Clothes
Thank you all for your kind comments. This story is one of my favorites. It was easy to write, once the premise was set, it kind of wrote itself. The back drop is set in and around my home town and home state, so that part of the story was easy and required little thought.
Dru did surprise me by posting it here.
BTW Dru, I would appreciate you writing my to let me know if you plan to post any of my other stories. The only place you could have gotten this story is Crystal's Storysite. I know that my email is there at the bottom of the story.
OK, mild rebuke over.
The rest of you, enjoy.
Hugs
Patricia
(Patricia_Allen@yahoo.com)
http://members.tripod.com/~Patricia_Marie/index.html
Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper ubi femininus sub ubi
Hugs
Patricia
Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper in femineo gerunt
Ich bin ein femininer Mann
Mature Audiences? Attention Erin.
Mature Audiences? Please, I don't write anything that isn't for general audiences.
Erin, is there any way to change the rating?
Hugs
Patricia
(Patricia_Allen@yahoo.com)
http://members.tripod.com/~Patricia_Marie/index.html
Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper ubi femininus sub ubi
Hugs
Patricia
Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper in femineo gerunt
Ich bin ein femininer Mann
I'll fix the audience rating
But this story is from BigCloset Classic, not Storysite.
I also changed the posted by so you can edit it yourself. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Pretty
Pretty story, I liked it. What I wanted say was already said, so isn't somewhere part2? ~_^
Wonderful and charming
I liked the story in that it does not involve any sort of sex. It is a story that most of us wish we would have been fortunate to have experienced. You have left the story open to a sequel if you will.
Jill Micayla
May you have a wonderful today and a better tomorrow
Jill Micayla
Be kinder than necessary,Because everyone you meet
Is fighting some kind of battle.
Wonderful story
This is such a sweet, touching story. Thank you so much for writing it, Patricia. ^.^
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Heather Rose Brown
Author of Bobby's Rainy Day Adventure
Sweet Loving Story Patricia
... one which I truly hope you continue. The exploration of Joan's school days and how she begins to change in thought or body and relating to others is the direction I would hope and love to see! Joan's willingness to please her mother and their relationship seemed very special to me. Although the mother did push the clothes wearing almost to a point I was going to say forced femme, she seemed to always allow him to back out if John so chose. I would say her wistfulness to have a daughter because of her husband causing such pain in her life might have bled over into her decision to prod John to see if he would be a girl. I'm sure other factors led to that decision in her mind.. just playing with an additional factor in it.
Please Patricia, If you decide to continue this, please try and explore Joan's school life and how she deals with her new found desires and relating to other's. You created a character I really can connect with and like a lot. Watching her grow up is what I'm reading this for.
Sephrena Lynn Miller
Loved your darling story
This was such a fun little story. Kinda what you would expect from a nine year old boy when he begins to wear girls clothing and goes out and about. Please continue it as it does call out for more chapters in John/Joan's life. The names you listed of the various locations gave me a clue that this was taking place along the coast of Oregon, except I can't place the bay mentioned. Thanks again for a sweet story, J-Lynn Miller
Depot Bay
Is south of Lincoln City and North of Newport. It's best know for the great spouting horn.
It's touted as the worlds smallest harbor. The harbor today covers approximately six acres, with a 50-foot wide channel opening – connecting to the Pacific Ocean. But what is claimed today as the world’s smallest harbor, used to be even smaller!
Before it was expanded 56 years ago, its rocky and twisted entrance was even smaller at just 30 feet wide!
Hugs
Patricia
Happiness is being all dressed up and HAVING some place to go.
Semper in femineo gerunt
Ich bin ein femininer Mann
Nice tale
So what if it's been nine years since you wrote it, and three since it was posted here? Maybe this comment will encourage others to take a gander...
Due to how long ago you wrote it, a sequel is probably unlikely, but if you ever did feel tempted to play with these characters again, I'm sure there'd be an appreciative audience :)
There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Wonderful
A wonderful story that I enjoyed from start to finish. It has all the innocence of a story told by a child, before the world has indoctrinated him into thinking there is something wrong.
Thank you
Joan
Good story JOAN seemingly has innocently agreed step by step. How deep could she go.
JessieC
Jessica Connors
Sweet story.
Its obvious while nervous John was pretty much intrigued with the idea of dressing as a girl almost form the start although he did not even suspect that till he tried it.
A sweet tale of self discovery! I like!
Simply Delightful!
This is a delightful story that is vividly told and flows seamlessly. I felt like a hooked fish being reeled in by a master angler. It was a pleasure to read and I look forward to reading your other stories.
Thank you,
Ginger
joanie
you won't be able to stop now or ever, so enjoy it....your a natural girl so enjoy your pretty clothes my dear plus i see that your mother enjoys having a daughter around and you seem to be closer to your mother as her daughter so why not make the most of it plus you are becoming comfortable in your girl clothes out in some public places.........i have had a healthy taste of what the dresses and skirts feels like myself but wish my mother took to me like yours did, your a lucky girl joanie......thank you Patricia Marie Allen for a most delightful story, you have talent as an author and i wish you all the best
Cousins clothes
I thought that it was an excellent story i wish that my mother was that understanding instead i got disowned never to speak to them again they made it quite clear that they didn't want me in the family
Girls rule
Reading through backlog
New stories are fun but old ones are special. Thanks again for taking the time and sharing this with us.
Your friend
Crash
My Cousin's Clothes
Nice story,i really like this plot,how far will john's mother go? of that route
Lovely story
I just loved this forgotten classic. Forgotten? Well, only 3 comments since 2017. I saved it to my list of favorites on Big Closet. Not stressful or pressured and so far everyone is enjoying the ride. Unfortunately, based on my assumption that this is set in the sixties, notwithstanding the Bug’s Life reference to 1998, it is going to be rough going when John/Joan hits puberty. Only the strong were able to chart a course for themselves then. Most of us lacked the loving support of Joan’s family.
Love your writing Patricia.
Jill
My cousins clothes
I loved this story very much