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Interesting story, especially with the epilogue...
Tons of mood shifts, all caused by Hamish! Niice!
He fell into the common trap of assumption making, but at least in the end, it lead to happiness for him and another! Except for that loose end, which could put an end to that happiness, which isn't even Gladis's fault! For all that she's a "villain", this is Hamish's story and his responsibility! He said he would take care of it, but then forgot! Haha!
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"She didn't like the thought of returning to Bakersville. She left for a reason."
Foreboding! Cool!
And the reason can't be Gladis, since "she had thankfully moved away before Gladis arrived in town." So, what is it? Hmm.
As we seen, Monika and Flynne are techy enough for smartphones. Where Flynne's father is, I wonder. Is he the reason that Monika left? Seems like a pretty good guess, for lack of other options.
But on the tech front, I'm thinking that since "How To Be A Fashion Witch" guides are on the technological dark web, maybe they could be a mother-daughter witch team, grinding their powers in a safe and sane way, until they're strong enough to take on Gladis.
Wonderful balance between
Wonderful balance between victim and villain. The fashion witch has some compassion for Hamish, and lets him contribute to his fate. Hamish goes thru the stages, first resisting, then being resigned to it, then accepting and embracing the changes. The relationship between them becomes less mistress to servant and more a partnership in the final changes. Well scripted, and an interesting departure from the other stories in the series.
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This story is awesome.
Out of all of the Fashion Witch stories I remember off hand, I think this is by far the best. I love how emotionally complex the main character became. And how the Fashion Witch seems to also have a complex personality.
And the possible cliff hanger at the end... Awesome.