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so this was going to be interesting.
sure is!
awesome chapter, huggles!
Busted
I hope mom is rational not just blood but the heels blades are out
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
Mothers Are Uncanny
You can't fool your Mum for very long. Now comes the interrogation.
With a teacher who is a Calendar Girl..
And a BFF like Laurel, Sarah is amassing some helpful contacts!
As Dallas mentioned last week, I missed Buffy the first time through, only being generally aware of the idea and the characters ( a bit like Friends, which I also missed. I must be the only person on the planet who thinks Chandler is someone who sells provisions for boats!) but despite that I am absolutely loving this take on the series, and having fun looking up the oblique names to work out why you have chosen them.
This is a really great story, and I am loving the wit and wisdom!
Lucy xx
"Lately it occurs to me..
what a long strange trip its been."
Not the only person
All my boat bits come from a chandler. He was perhaps the least annoying member of the Friends cast, but he's not the first thing that springs to mind when that word comes around.
Yup, you spotted Jenny Calendar, and Laurel Pinkstone is Willow Rosenberg. Pinkstone is a bit naff, but it's the only translation that really works. As for Xander, I guess we need to look to the actor's name.
Anyone made the connection with the principal yet?
Well I guess...
That a Piccolo is just a little Flutie!
Yes, that one made me laugh too. I'd picked that Nick was based on Xander too.
Lucy xx
"Lately it occurs to me..
what a long strange trip its been."
Ah, well, you see Mum, the thing is...
I'm bursting with curiosity about the coming conversation. Mrs Gellar, it's Ok, your daughter isn't pregnant or sleeping around or into drugs or booze. What's there to worry about?
Teri Ann
"Reach for the sun."
Haven't had a good cliffhanger like this since...
You Meant it For Evil. Enjoy the anticip... ... ... ...ation.
Oops!
Her daughter the vampire slayer…
Another winner
Loved this chapter, but there’s one particular thing I want to highlight. For me, writing convincing dialogue for teenagers talking to other teenagers is hard (I can generally write a decent dialogue between a teenager and an adult). The “besties’ conversation was absolutely perfect, and very believable. Well done, as always!
— Emma
Teenage chatter
The dialogue between Buffy and Willow was soooo well written. My girl inside imagines she's with them and it flows. Helps that the two had such amazingly individual voices. I massively enjoyed writing that conversation.
Very Interesting!
Now tell me about the blood.
Gillian Cairns
Interesting as in that old Chinese curse
May you live in interesting times.