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Part five...
...was meant to be a lot longer, so what was meant to be seven parts in total is now up to nine, and may even get longer as I tell the story. Hopefully not too long though.
Amy.
A story cannot be too long...
when the length serves a purpose and contributes to the story, and there is a lot that can be explored with this one. What is not so good is when a story is being purposely drawn out to milk it for more profit. I used to watch quite a bit of Japanese animation and there were several series that became popular but I lost interest in them when they seemed to fall into repeating cycles without advancing the plot.
Really enjoying this story and am looking forward to the next part.
Indeed...
There are a number of stories that are the length of multiple War and Peace novels, and that only seems to increace readership.
going to school is a good move for her
it will get her a chance to have connections with others.
I Understand The Logic
But will it get boring for Louise, relearning all that she has learned before? Physical interaction with other students of her apparent age may be quite a trial.
An interesting conundrum, and a good story, thanks, Amy.
School . . .
Being 15 these days will be nothing like when Lew was that age and certainly not like when he was a young boy ! With social media these days and the pressures on young girls the way society sexualises them . . . Lou is gouing to find it a real game changer ! Whats more, the tribal nature of school could be a real issue - being "the new girl" will make it difficult for her to assimulate into the right cliques for her and she could be excluded or could associate with the wrong girls. Its a minefield she will need to navigate carefully !!!!
Can't wait to follow her journey in the next chapter - loving the story soooooo much !!!
Hugs&Kudos!!
Suzi
Fortunately...
She has the perspective of age. The drama that can be so important to kids will largely fail to faze her.