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Chuckle, Chuckle...Snicker, Snicker!
Can't say any more without spoiling it,
Joanne
I can't decide...
...if this is more scary, or more hilarious!
Great, pro-level work-up, with a ding-dang-zinger for an ending. Great stuff, Laika!
I suppose...
I could say you left us dangling with that ending... *grin*
Some days you're the pigeon, some days you're the statue
Roy Cohn. Right...
Bobby Kennedy, I presume?
(Anyway, writer credits on the song, originally recorded by Marcie Blane, went to Hank Hoffman and Gary Klein, who don't seem to have written anything else of significance.)
Eric
Roy Cohn
Yep, Bobby Kennedy. Glad somebody got that. A pretty dumb joke because if I'm not mistaken they were rivals for J. Edgar Hoover's affections. I have this virus that makes it just about impossible for me to look anything up. My Yahoo searches wind up everywhere but where they're supposed to, so this joke quote was temporary 'til I could find the actual authors and credit them. So thanks, Eric. And since you've done it I think I'll leave it as is...
~~~hugs, Laika
for the axe had convinced them that because his handle
was made of wood he was one of them.
It's cute
It's a cute and silly, didn't scare me at all just made me laugh xD
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I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Bisexual, transsexual, gamer girl, princess, furry that writes horror stories and proud ^^
I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D
Um...snerk...
..well...ummmpphh.. yes very, um... nice, I think, but... well..pfft... I'm not quite sure it qualifies as Horror with a capital H. Then maybe I'm just weird like that. "So Bobby hon, whatcha think huh??"
I lurv it. But it's terribly unconventional dear, what will the neighbours think?
Kristina
very twilight zone
given the content on this site the ending wasn't exactly a surprise, but it's a good story, well written, with a nice "twilight zone" kind of feel to it.
not as think as i smart i am
I wondered where this was
I wondered where this was going---great story!
Nice one Laika
Like the last person, I did not know where it was going, expected something to happen to Bobby maybe, nice kick.
DM
I loved it!!!!!
and before I forget, just in case you may have forgotten and while I'm on the subject; as a matter of fact, it just occurred to me.....superb!!!
This just in....Dateline December 6, 2011...Bobby's Girl still makes me laugh to the point of tears...Love it love it love it!
Love, Andrea Lena
Holy Moley
This STILL is some of the best humor to grace this place (or any other, for that matter) I love this!!!!!!!!!!
Love, Andrea Lena
I would add at least two other spells
One: Not to become one's heart's desire, but to know exatly what constitutes one's heart's desire. A simple precaution - Jane is at least smart. What if one's heart's desire was a submissive bimbo catering to one's all needs?
Two: A 'trial version' of the spell. One that can be both cancelled when needed and will have a set time limit, and a short one at that. Best if it has a sort of a timer when like, every day you have to reset it and you will still have only a week at most.
Faraway
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
I was waiting for a shoe to drop
Any shoe. Then you threw the whole shop at me!
I don't usually go for this type of story but, as it's you, Laika, I just had to read it.
I can imagine the horror that Jane felt. Having spent most of a lifetime getting rid of my own poison factories, I'd be horrified if they unexpectedly returned - especially if I caused it to happen.
Susie
Well this seems to have
Well this seems to have brought everything to a new head! Janice Lynn
Like, Really Laika
You just wish.
In some form or other. ;-)
Hugs, Renee
Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee
Amusing.
As usual from you. I got a pretty good chuckle out of the ending. Still grinning about it now.
Not expecting to arrive there
RAMI
I was expecting to be led somewhere, like Bobby becoming Bobbie and Janey not being into the lesbian life, but you took us in another direction altogether.
Great story.
RAMI
RAMI
Gotta love your style
You had me expecting everything but that till the end.Lol
Amy
Excellent!
I was kind of expecting Janey to turn into a guy, but I didn't expect that! Great story Laika!
Saless
"But it is also tradition that times *must* and always do change, my friend." - Eddie Murphy, Coming To America
Happy Days
ALISON
Great story,great ending and I guess Bobby was happy! There is obviously an "in" joke there somewhere that we are not aware of "Down Under"----just loved the story,may God bless you.Alison
ALISON
Squishin' and Jammin' and Bulgin'
I'm up quite late but I had to get to your story, and I'm glad I did.
What a hoot! I'm not sure about the slow beginning but the ending was good -- a little disturbing in a Twilight Zone kind of way like someone else remarked, but good.
Janey's poor shorts, having to endure such confusion. Now I'll probably have a strange dream about the whole thing. I wonder if I can turn it to my advantage. Hmmmm. This could be fun.
Thanks, Laika!
- Terry
Bobby's Girl
When I read the title and brief description, the first thing that popped into my head was Bobby liked boys and as I read further to find that he had no steady (unlike any high school football hero), thought I must be right. So when Jane got to the potion and the words she spoke I thought that she would wake a boy, oooppps! I was only half right.
For you who saw no terror in this story. If you were a gg like our heroin and you woke with a little extra "dangle" that would be real horror and terror!!!!!
By the way "realizing that her stubby legs had become much, much lot longer." think that might need a little tweak? Otherwise pretty good. A-
The English Teacher
So much to read, so little time and only one of me :)
The English Teacher
Grammatical Snark
That bit of grammatical snark at the end, especially by The English Teacher, invites notice of her reference to the story's "heroin".
-- Daphne Xu
I didn't see that coming!
But it goes to show you that if you have to be someone else to be loved, it so ain't worth it!
Lisa
Sill a lot of fun
I noticed I had already given it a thumbs up. I would give it another one if I could. If your stories had any more irony in them, they would rust.
Portia
Portia
A Dangling End
I read this story when it showed up as a "Random Solo", and I thought I'd read it before, yet I didn't see any comment (or Kudos) of my own. It must have been a different story with essentially the same plot. Anyways, I thought I knew how it would end, but I was definitely caught by surprise: her new lovely boobacious cheerleader's body.
Thanks, Laika.
-- Daphne Xu
Another Bobby's Girl
Wonder if you might be thinking of a novel by J.D. Austin, also titled "Bobby's Girl". An enjoyable SF book about an alien princess sent to earth to protect her during a war between her home world, Thradon, and another planet. Along the way she is transformed into a human female; but the source for her appearance is derived from romantic movies and she emerges on earth as a well-built but extremely intelligent blonde bombshell, Then she meets a film director . . . .
“When a clown moves into a palace, he doesn’t become a king. The palace becomes a circus.” - Turkish Proverb
Earlier Read
Nope. I read the story on Fictionmania when it was posted there, and commented.
-- Daphne Xu
laughing
Good tale. Great ending.
Your story is grammatically incorrect
You can't end a story with a dangling participle.
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Snerk.
I am so giggling right now.
Indeed
The poor Butt-Monkey.
-- Daphne Xu
A Spinoff of "Play Nice"!
I loved the longer story, and I like seeing those characters pop up again.
This one is fun and quick, and made me laugh.
thanks,
- io
If you try sometime
You’ll find, you get what you need. Even if it was probably the last “thing” she wanted!
— Emma
Carnival of Mirrors
This was essentially a bit of info given by the old man (Solomon) to a couple prospective customers at the entrance to the Carnival of Mirrors. Sometimes, it's outright horror. (Creator of Universe: BobH, Carnival of Mirrors: Four Fates, text version, the author probably should have included "Horror" in the categories.)
-- Daphne Xu