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The Country Life - Part 4
Reading this, I can't help but picture the cast of the Hannah Montanna Movie. I hope that Brett is the gent that Ally needs for him to be if things get dicey because I can't help but believe that karma might just arrange for the new Ally to go thruogh what the old Ally went through to test her and Brett.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Hmmmm...I wonder what her
Hmmmm...I wonder what her 'one fulfilled request (No porno stuff)' will be at the end of the night. The romantic in me is hoping it's a kiss or at least a request for a second date. I'm guessing Ally has something in mind in arranging the terms though. She's a braver girl than I am though in eating boiled crawfish!!! The limit of my southern seafood experience was a meal in Landry's Seafood House in I think Corpus Christi or Galveston (it was a whirlwind tour of east texas for business) and that was pretty conventional seafood!! The heads...ewwww!!!
Another great chapter Lilith.
"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."
Young love
I'm simply delighted at this story! ^_^
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Great Story
Like the easy pace of this. You have a great way with words.
I just love
ALISON
'the softness and serenity of country life.A sweet story.
ALISON
Just what the doctor ordered
A dash of sweetness, a touch of romance, and a generous helping of wit.
Thanks for the update, they're always welcome!
Cheers,
-Christelle
"Fun-loving geek-chick who's addicted to sunlight!"
-Christelle
"Fun-loving geek-chick who's addicted to sunlight!"
Nice update
I like the easy, tranquil pace of the story and the focus on the main character emotions. Nice work!
Perfect Photo
Yay! Another chapter!
I love the photo. I think it sets the perfect tone for this chapter. She's trying to run away from her feelings but she looks behind her, hoping that they'll follow. She's really getting into her new life.
Thanks for the story.
- Terry
Nice!
Nice story y'all!
I liked the bit with the handgun in the purse, pistol packin Mamma!
I can't imagine what she would have done with it if he had tried to take advantage of her?
If she keeps eating like that she'll need to go up a size!
LoL
Rita
Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)
LoL
Rita
Hmmm
well the only other place I heard the term "safe as houses" was in the book -The Host- any conection?
I nearly fell over laughing at the sucking statement!
Keep 'em come'n
Please don't stop this wonderful story any time soon.
It's simply delightful.
Now I'm hungry for crayfish.....
Luv,
Connie
May I have Shrimp or Oysters instead?
It's the suckin on their heads that blows my mind. I do mine elsewhere. :)
Gwendolyn
This is starting to become a
This is starting to become a very sweet story and the romantic in me is drooling for more :P
Thanks for sharing
Claire :)
Bailey's Angel
The Godmother :p
Ally
Great story hun. THATS IT I hooked!!!! lol I hope that things go well for Ally & she & breat get merried. I have a feeling they will. Even though the real Ally is dead & gone the person in her body is I think making a mends for what he didn't do & what he did do. Things age looking up for both parties & I think thigs will happen on their own. I look forard to part 5 of "The Country Life".
Love Samantha Renee Heart
Love Samantha Renee Heart
unusual premise..
but a great story. a very different kind of fish out of water story. I hope you get a chance to finish this. thanks
Good story
I hope you finish it too.
If not, well, it stands alone pretty well.
Are you considering finishing
Are you considering finishing this? It's a really nice story. I'd love to know how it ends. I hope one day you come back to it.
Hey Lilith,I just wanted to
Hey Lilith,I just wanted to say that this story is really good and it would be nice if you continued it.
Well, once again I find
Well, once again I find mahself in love with the feelings of being in love, or maybe even better, the front waves of it. Thanks for the great story Lilith. Wonderful as it stands, and also our imaginations can view all kinds of possibilities with more fun, romance and laughs.
Jeanna - sounds like Gina
Well here ah am, in love again ..
Well, once again I find mahself in love with the feelings of being in love, or maybe even better, the front waves of it. Thanks for the great story Lilith. Wonderful as it stands, and also our imaginations can view all kinds of possibilities with more fun, romance and laughs.
Jeanna - sounds like Gina