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so good
Chapter after chapter is very good. Confessed to to killing someone he didn't what up with that.
hugs!
grover-
Kerilas' confession
Considering how depressed and morbid Kerilas was in the chapters before Jalese's death, he might have confessed just to get out.
I had the same thought
James went into a great detail constructing Kerilas' evil past history, but James himself seems to be a nice guy. It's not surprising that his resurfacing memories are causing him a great deal of emotional distress.
Scott
Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of--but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards.
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enoough for Love'
Bree
The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense.
-- Tom Clancy
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Indeed
I was also thinking of his theory that Paul, James, Dave and Lee are nothing more than derangements brought on by the conditions at the slaver camp.
I'm with Tani
I don't want Lotan to get off. It's not so much the death of Jalese, that was an accident though it was do to his stupidity. But running off like he did, that just really burns me.
It is a credit to your skill at storytelling that this tale evokes such feelings, Rachel. Once more I congratulate you and look forward to more.
Scott
Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of--but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards.
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enoough for Love'
Bree
The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense.
-- Tom Clancy
http://genomorph.tglibrary.com/ (Currently broken)
http://bree-ramsey314.livejournal.com/
Twitter: @genomorph
Perhaps James' resurfacing me
Perhaps James' resurfacing memories are taking control almost subconsciously, so that he did indeed influence Lotan to kill the NPC... and it was James' own non-evil sense of self that confessed to the murder. What would Kerilas have to gain from splitting up the party? Or is a chaotic evil character and did it on whim?
The Legendary Lost Ninja
The thing to remember...
... is what James said earlier. Kerilas is over two hundred years old, with centuries of memories. Next to that James' twenty something years is nothing. I think James is afraid he'll become Kerilas.
Scott
Writing is not necessarily something to be ashamed of--but do it in private and wash your hands afterwards.
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enoough for Love'
Bree
The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense.
-- Tom Clancy
http://genomorph.tglibrary.com/ (Currently broken)
http://bree-ramsey314.livejournal.com/
Twitter: @genomorph
very different
You also have to take into account that their personalities are very different. The poor kid might be driven mad by memories of truly nasty things that Kerilas has done in the past. He also might be frighten that he might become Kerilas in truth and am looking to prevent that.
I do like that Sam is now Trans-gender, and no one is going, Oh just get use to being an girl. Sam is really hurting here! She might learn to live with it, but we all know how much unseen pain is there. Very well done!
Hugs!
grover-
Encouragement
Just posting this as a note of appreciation. Am enjoying this story quite a bit, and look forward anxiously to each new chapter. I think the word I'm looking for is "enthralled."