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Darn it! I can only 'kudo' ONCE!
I loved it, and can't wait for the next one. I wanna see what happens to Nash. I think he's taken a bite out of a hornet's nest, personally. I WOULD like it if Alexis, Alice and Pam ALL took him down, though!
Once again, another wonderful story!
Wren
I am glad to see that you are continuing this story
So far, I have enjoyed this story quite a bit.
There should always be a plan B
Bittersweet time for Pam obviously.
Sadly Alexis had too many principals for this mission and could not be in enough places at one time. It also means that Alice needs to have her own light armor in the field. Alice obviously can still leave the base with a mask on but it will be interesting to see how Alexis settles Nash's hash.
I love this ending Sara :)
Kim
Wonderful story
I'm glad that Alexis and Alice got their mother back, but I am sorry that Paul had to die to allow Alex to know that his father did love him.
Looking forward to Book 3. Hopefully Dillon Nash gets what has coming to him and that it doesn't cost Alexis too much of herself.
Thank you for writing what I think is an inspiring story.
so sad
Let's just say I cried. Thank you for your wonderful stoiries sara.
I really don't know how to
I really don't know how to express my thoughts on this story. It is a very good one, and I have enjoyed it greatly! However, I am anxiously awaiting more stories with "The Guardian Angel" Please keep them coming!
Don't let someone else talk you out of your dreams. How can we have dreams come true, if we have no dreams?
Katrina Gayle "Stormy" Storm
Project Guardian: Book 2, Chapter 14.
A most bittersweet reunion and reconciliation and a promise of a future battle to end an evil. But is Nash involved with a group more powerful than Bill's?
May Your Light Forever Shine
That left me breathless
That part was some ride; a lot happened.
I'm glad I'm not in Nash's shoes; you bump into a lot of lampposts while looking over your shoulder. His comeuppance won't be pleasant at all when Alexis catches up with him. She has a short fuse anyway.
Thank you, Sara, for an exhilarating tale and also to Samantha for editing.
S.
Sasha and Brad died too fast but understandably so
It might have been emotionally satisfying to cripple them then imprison them for life or at least let them realize they were dying but they were killers and had to be stopped before they could kill again. Logic demanded the threat be neutralized as quickly and as certainly as possible.
Alexis only mistake was in not going after Dillon immediately but then she would never have heard her father's apology.
You never said if she hit the bastard with one of her throwing knifes?
His James Bond villain style escape could be part bravado and he really was wounded. BTW her support people messed up. Why did they not know about the helicopter? Why no high power sniper rifle or shoulder launched anti aircraft/anti tank missile in the Mustang's trunk? Hell not even the Bat BeamTM mounted on the hood... Opps, wrong comic crime fighters!
His needs a slow death or one where he knows it is coming but he can't escape IE an about to explode building or aircraft? A bomb surgically implanted in his abdomen? Being strapped to a chair being forced to listen to a never ending loop of EVERYTHING Justin Bieber ever recorded?
-- grin --
But then he is a cold-blooded killer and probably LIKES that stuff.
Wouldn't it be ironic if the murdered father's chip design work could be used in a missile that eventually shoots the bastard out of the sky or blows him to kingdom come in his house/car/lair.
A solid and believable ending even given it's in a sci-fi James Bond-ish world.
Two thumbs up. I would give you more but I only have two hands.
John in Wauwatosa
P.S. If I didn't before kudos for your ending to To Make a Wish. Nicely done.
John in Wauwatosa
Thank you!
This was a wonderful story in 14 parts. I look forward to the next adventure.
Thanks.
Red MacDonald
Sad, but Uplifting
It is sad that Paul died, but he redeemed himself at the end and Pamela got to reconnect with her daughters.
So who is the fallen angel? I hope Nash gets what is coming to him. I also hope the next one starts soon. You realize it's not fair to your readers to end two stories in a little over a week. First Sarah and then Alexis.
Thanks for a good story and I look forward to the further adventures of the Guardian.
As always,
Dru
As always,
Dru
Project Guardian
This is a great series and you are one great writer. Please don't stop now. To many of the real good writers have stopped over the years. Thank you very much.
Jeanne
Revenge What a Great Motive
You have one truely great Motive for the book Please dont wait to long for it. I just got done with reading books 1&2 and Ive fallen in Love with Alice And Alexis plus crew. Lets not forget about Tam & Mel. Those 2 are terror on wheels just waiting too happen.
May the peace and happiness of the Goddess keep and protect you
as always your humble outlaw
Jessie Wolf
Great Story
I've seen your posts for a while now, but never managed to sit down and read one of your stories. This one had me hooked for a lot of reasons, not limited to morbid curiosity after it took such a dark turn early on in the first book. I look forward to seeing the third book when you get around to it, the storyline and the writing were very enjoyable to read!
The only thing
The only thing that seems to be missing is the next book this was something that I really enjoyed. And even though I personally feel that each of the chapters are way to short at least for my liking due to the word count at the bottom. I would still pay the normal $2.99 for them if they were in book form on Amazon. Thank you for the wonderful stories so far and I hope that there will be more to this series soon as it seems that you are back.
There's Still Hope
As the author recently made a triumphant return to posting stuff, I'd like to think there's still hope that the long awaited book three will arrive.
Hoping for there more soon