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nice timing
I just finished ch 1-3. well done, thanks
Whoa Nolly, hold it there
Whoa Nolly, hold it there just a little moment.. Starting with aliens, disclaiming CIA, and all whatnot is a guaranteed way of alienating a would-be good friend. Sure, you feel overwhelmed, and it's all quite harrowing, but there is a difference between the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but a little white lie. Lies.
Kim might think you're completely barmy, and even begin to become a little mad, for who do you think she is? As 'nutty' as you apparently appear? Nononono, no alien technology explanations.. Stick with the CIA.
And keep writing :) Lots and lots of writing. Let me Whisper something in your ear: We like your writings. A lot.
Thanks,
Jo-Anne
Memory serves me
If I remember correctly Jenna's revelation works out well in the end. I'm hoping the story goes further than it did previously. It would be interesting to see what would happen if Kim and Mike run across an active MAU.
Yep...
I debated revising that scene more than few times, which probably means I should have. :)
Oh well, I think it does work out in the end though.
-- Sleethr
Uuuuh Huh
Why change the scene? It works as is. The original story kinda left us hanging 2 installments from now. And that really sucks-from the readers' POV
Enjoying rereading this refactored tale
Looking forward to reading lots of new stuff! :)
I have only one thing to say.
Please... may I have some more? Great, great stuff.
Catherine Linda Michel
As a T-woman, I do have a Y chromosome... it's just in cursive, pink script.
Ahh
And there's the friend. People need someone to talk to when they're hiding something huge, and I'm glad Jenna has found that person (hopefully).
I will be awaiting the next chapter eagerly :)
-Tas