Ok, so the 6th part of Jessica's Story has been posted. This is one part I'm expecting to get comments on, on various matters. I'll just say that it took several attempts to write the dialogue between Anne and Julia, that led to them kissing. I wanted Anne to be reluctant, going into the talk, which is why she denies her attraction to Julia in the first place. But she isn't convincing, and Julia notes it, prompting her to continue the questioning.

I admit that the scene was a little hasty, and I apologise.

Jessica certainly gets away with her hair too. It wouldn't have grown that much in the summer, and even with a more girly style, the chance of being outed as Peter should have been greater than portrayed. But no harm is done, and she gets 2 new friends/confidants.