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You're back!!
And we finally get back to Kristina, get a long overdue untapped phone, and some useful advice to boot! Woot!
Also, the long-ongoing argument about having a leak in the security itself gets more flesh!
Okay, cheating here ;) But, I must admit, I kinda lost track of things a little...
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Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
I'm so happy to see more of
I'm so happy to see more of this story! What a great present to us for the winter holidays.
welcome back
Its good to see another chapter. We already knew she was a very sharp kid. The committee may have made the perfect choice, much to their own chagrin. She has taken care of back up communications, and is getting her own "trusted" network in place. Her information is starting to roll in, and while sorting it may be very hard, it may give the results they are already looking for. I think the committee may have started the whole program as a blind to "prove" there is not really a problem, or that it is somewhere else. But, I think the girl may blow the whole thing up in their faces and bring a lot of trash into the open.
Counter surveillance
I remember reading [1] that apparently the worst thing you can do if you suspect you're being followed is to head in a straight line, or walk fast - it draws their attention to you and makes their pursuit easier. Instead, taking lots of corners can help throw them off you (or at least make their life more difficult) - and if you're lucky enough to be in a town with stores that have both front and rear entrances, once you've analysed the size of the surveillance team, it may be possible to dive into the store, head towards the back, and if you throw them, head out again. Unless they're professional enough to have multiple teams who take it in turns to observe you, you stand a chance of 'divide and conquer'.
--Ben
[1] Andy McNab's "Nick Stone" series of novels. Generally speaking, there'd be a few short "firefights" in the novels, but a lot more time evading capture. Or at least, that's how I remember them - it's been a few years since I last read one...
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Trust issues
Welcome back- what a wonderful surprise!
Well this episode should make it abundantly clear that Aunt Jen is trust-worthy at least - I still think she secretly hopes that Tina is here to stay, she seems to be reinforcing the notion that being a girl is a positive experience, I also wonder what will happen with Caitlin - it seems she may be a more deserving recipient of Chris's affections after all - or is she? This is starting to remind me of the Manga/Animé Kashimashi : Girl meets Girl
The nature of Monkey is - Irrepressible!!!
The nature of Monkey is - Irrepressible!!!
This chapter is quite revealing
and has a lot of information we didn't have in the previous chapters. I am sure that the Major and Tina, with Laurie's help will find a hornets nest in with the sparrows. Now, Aunt Jen broke the ice for what everybody has been saying. I am looking forward to Tina remaining and Chris becoming a faded memory. Tina seems happier as a girl, and Aunt Jen is right too, girl friend realtionships make for a stronger future life, because of the bonding thing. A wonderful chapter, but it would spoil things to have Tina revert back to Chris, especially the friends she has made as Tina, where as Chris she was largely ignored. Thank you for sharing, and take your time. This is a story worth waiting for.
"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."
Love & hugs,
Barbara
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."
Love & hugs,
Barbara
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Welcome back!
Thanks so much for the new episode.
It would be wonderful if we all didn't have to deal with "real life" but I'm glad you were able to take a break from it and get this out.
Of course, we are all looking for more, but we can wait!
Hugs
Carla Ann
Welcome back, Tiff!
I hope your real life situation sorts itself out, and allows you to write more, but until then, we'll be satisfied for what we can get. Great story, very well written. Thank you for sharing it, and your talent, with us.
Happy Holidays from,
Catherine Linda Michel
As a T-woman, I do have a Y chromosome... it's just in cursive, pink script.
Great to see you back
Great to see you back. A well tangled tale and a good read. I hope real life keeps it's head down and lets you continue the fun.
Enjoy this story.
Glad to be able to follow this again even if it is only for a short time. Looks like the tumblers are falling into place to begin to unlock this mystery. Tina appears to be the key.
Interesting how she learns about Catlin's interest in Chris. She may have to stay Tina just to avoid Chris being the object of too many girls affections. Boy wouldn't it have been nice to get inside info like this when I was a teen.
Hugs,
Trish-Ann
~There is no reality, only perception~
Hugs,
Trish Ann
~There is no reality, only perception~
I have been following this
I have been following this story from the first and really like it.
I am sorry that real life is getting in your way. I know how that can be.
Good luck. *hugs*
A stranger is just a friend that you haven't met yet.
Sort of like Nancy Drew
I like a nice mystery. I know how real life can make things wonkie. I am fortunate that I only have one life now, no pretending. I really like your writing.
Khadijah Gwen
I love this story, and have
I love this story, and have been reading it since you first posted chapter 1. I'm SO glad you're back after this too long absence!
Something Feels Strange - 31
Tina is growing up, BIG TIME as a spy. Plus, with her having been a boy, she will know about being a girl, if she ever becomes Chris, again. Could they actually split the two didiferent personeas in her and create a body for her?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
who would be worried by a simple teen girl working as an intern?
I hope nobody, but things could happen ...
Chat with "Daddy"
"After all, who would be worried by a simple teen girl working as an intern?" The Weak Anthropic Principle: the vast majority of the time, one would properly not worry. But the rare case that one should worry is the case that one writes the story about. The Survivorship issue.
So, do the characters know that they are part of a story and don't really exist? :-P
Dr. Sommers is clean? I wouldn't bet on it. Dr. Lang actually has more of an alibi, bad as it is. He's probably clean. Dr. Sommers... well, I hope that one can think of a reason, based on his history and personality, why he might be on the insurgents' side.
And Tina very nicely rebukes a couple boys attracted to her, even getting them to help her choose a new knife.
-- Daphne Xu
It's nice to have some experience to help,
And it looks like our girl's gonna need all the help she can get.