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Concluding chapter?
I hope you'll continue writing about Alena and Alison, either in a sequel or through one of the other character's stories. Perhaps at some point in time, the siblings will get to meet up with the rest of the gang - and hopefully have some joint adventures while the military start scouting out for a ground base for them (after all, although Jade's starship is secure and an ideal retreat, it's not ideal as a day-to-day base of operations).
There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Don't worry, I'm only
Don't worry, I'm only concluding Chapter 4, not the story. There's actually two crossovers planned for the future; Alena/Poison Ivy and another one with a character you haven't met yet...
People assume that time is a strict progression of cause-of-effect...but actually, from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly...timey-wimey...stuff.
This is becoming one of my
This is becoming one of my favorite stories in this universe. I really like what you're doing with Jade and I the growth of Alena as well!
~Lili
Blog: http://lilithlangtree.tglibrary.com/
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/lilith_langtree
~Lili
Write the story that you most desperately want to read.
Green With Envy-4
If Alison could wear the Star Heart Ring, could Alena and Alison BOTH wear Jade's type of Ring? And could Jade wear the Star Heart Ring? What if one of them was to wear both rings?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
On the subject of power
On the subject of power rings; anyone can wear a traditional Green Lantern power ring, although whether or not they have the Willpower to do so effectively is another matter entirely; there was an episode of The Batman where Penguin accidentally got a power ring, and the results were hilarious at best.
The Star Heart ring was specifically created for Alena; Alison may be able to use it as she is Alen's twin, but only under special circumstances, as the power source (the Star Heart) is quite literally part of Alena.
People assume that time is a strict progression of cause-of-effect...but actually, from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly...timey-wimey...stuff.
If we pull the entire spectrum in
It would be that Alena could make do with an indigo colored ring - as I recall, Indigo was coined as the color of compassion.
Also, to quote the Indigo Tribe Wikipedia Entry:
I can just see this one as what happened exactly in that possible future/dream - an act of pushing the darkness away.
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
The Star Heart.
Is learning how to be human? Or at least how humans work. Nice touch with that one.
Why do I get the feeling that Alison is going to get into more of the action as things progress here? :)
We keep learning new things with each chapter, and getting to know both Alena and her sister a bit better in each one. I'm with Lillith, I really like these two characters.
Maggie
A Lot of Fun
With endless possibilities. I am not familiar with this universe, but I found it to be a very enjoyable visit. I read all foour stories over the last hour and will definitely look for more. This is just beginning.
Portia
Portia
Training Training Training
It seems like Alena is going to be very busy with training. She needs to learn how to be a girl as well as how to use her Star Heart powers and the Green Lantern ring. I hope she can keep it all together as she progresses. The nightmare doesn't help.
Since Alena totally shares herself with Star Heart, doesn't that mean she can draw on some of Star Heart's strength when dealing with everything? She's been having Star Heart's nightmare so why can't they work together to look for a better way to deal with it? The future is shaped by our decisions so they can make better decisions! Right?
I liked seeing Alison in this chapter and I love how you're slowly drawing Jade out of her shell.
Thanks for another chapter!
- Terry
I just wanted to say that I
I just wanted to say that I AM enjoying this series, and I avidly read it when a new story comes out.
You make me feel bad however, I haven't been doing much with Catwoman, and here you are with three sets of characters, with multiple stories in each. I feel like a slacker.
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May the Stars Light Your Path
Maid Joy
http://i-know-i-know-but.net/
Make that four...
Since I just added my newest story... :\
People assume that time is a strict progression of cause-of-effect...but actually, from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly...timey-wimey...stuff.
Hey Joy! You know what sucks
Hey Joy! You know what sucks even worse? The story Lyceus just came out with a little while ago (Starring Magik)Yeah... it sprouted from an idea conceived only last night. I think I may vomit.
Ahhh, I remember my heyday when I could pound out 10-15,000 words in one sitting. Where's my arthritis medication and enema bag? O_o
~Lili
Blog: http://lilithlangtree.tglibrary.com/
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/lilith_langtree
~Lili
Write the story that you most desperately want to read.
What can I say
Give Lynceus an idea and you will soon have a plethora of stories! It's just how he is.
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Yeah, I just read it. I'm
Yeah, I just read it. I'm ready to go break some fingers....
either that or I'll have to counter with Emma Frost.
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May the Stars Light Your Path
Maid Joy
http://i-know-i-know-but.net/
You really have a way with characters.
But then you always have. I really love to read your stories. *hugs*
A stranger is just a friend that you haven't met yet.
Ack, not my fingers! The
Ack, not my fingers!
The ideas aren't the hard part really, it's being able to see one story through to the end; go to Crystal Hall, I have at least 20 unfinished fics. Kind of depressing really.
People assume that time is a strict progression of cause-of-effect...but actually, from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly...timey-wimey...stuff.