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Certainly Consistent Enough...
...with "Fancy a Bite"; if anything they seemed too similar. (From the set-up, I thought Ellie and Paul had run into a succubus upstairs, with the pre-hormonal Tony their only hope for escape.)
Eric
A different tale on becoming a vampire, Sue
You did another story a few years back ib a sinilar VEIN, -- snicker -- and this one is every bit as cute.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Fangs Ain’t What They Used To Be
A cute horror story.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
St Vlad's
Thanks for reading the story. There is a tie in with the two stories, hence the St Vlads reference under the title and at the end.
This is the other story in the St Vlads 'world'.
http://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/fiction/14474/fancy-bite
Hugs
Sue
Sigh. And you would have thought
That a hundred and seventy years is enough to catch at least the gist of all the interspecies interactions and terminology. What a ditz! ^_^
And really, what kind of vampire is that who forgets the first rule of biting - do it on their neck and gag them beforehand. ;)
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
This is cool!
I liked it a lot. Will there be more? Do we have to wait for next Hallowe'en?
St. Vlad's sounds interesting. What kind of classes are there? I can only imagine Gym class...
More, please?
Wren
Fun Story
I don't know about the other stories in the St Vlad's universe but this one was a lot of fun.
"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."
I'm Just Batty for St. Vlad's Stories
This is a cute little Halloween story. It seemed a little similar to Fancy a Bite but it still stands nicely on its own.
Thanks! You got my vote.
- Terry
Thanks for the comments, I
Thanks for the comments, I have put a blog up regarding this story.
Hugs
Sue
The biggest mystery
I loved this story because it starts off in such a credible way, and then, bit by bit, inexplicable things happen.
I'd been wondering whether it was going to turn into one of those "I woke up and it was all a dream," stories, but this was much more satisfying.
Well crafted, enjoyable, and a great Hallowe'en tale.
My only complaint: you didn't explain the biggest mystery. Why is it Hallowe'en and not Halloween?
Love Charlotte
Hallowe'een
The word Halloween is first attested in the 16th century and represents a Scottish variant of the fuller All-Hallows-Even ("evening"), that is, the night before All Hallows Day. (courtesey of wikipedia.) Thank you Sue.
Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena
Love, Andrea Lena
Mea Culpa
It's all my fault: as a pedantic old hack I felt that the apostrophe was necessary because of the missing "V". As those for whom I edit know, I am a bit of a stickler about punctuation. Forty-five years of earning my living as a writer, journalist, editor and publisher tends to be habit-forming.
Gabi.
Gabi.
Pedant.
Hallowe'en for me too. And I noticed "hanged" and not "hung"---yay for le mot juste! My inner grammer (pun) nazi was purring.
Good for you…
…Cyclist, for noticing "hanged". Meat is "hung" to mature it, but people are hanged. Well, I'll be danged—or should that be dung?
Gabi.
Gabi.
Oh, I don't know...
I didn't think you made THAT many punctuation adjustments... :-)
Anne
Dunno Wotcher Whingein' About
A prefectly (sic) good St. Vlads' story. Lots of authors use the same universe or the same setting for their stories, and I don't know why this one should excite comment on those grounds.
This site has fanfics and retcons and Gabys' and Whateleys and...and....and....etcetera.
Worked for me,
Joanne
Priceless
‘Where are we–Transylvania?’
It's as if I can hear Miss Millicent Fritton (the great Alistair Sim) replying
‘No dear, Chipping Ongar,’
Speaker