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just read 12 ...and.....
... there I am sliding down one of those monster slippery slide things, twisting and turning...no chance to stop.. just have to let gravity do it's thing. A wild ride. I sort of get the feeling we're going again though. Just a minute.. let me catch my breath.
Kristina
Slow down?
You. Want. Me. To Slow. This. Down? :)
And chapter 14 has more than a bit of action, too. Never let it be said that Zhorians don't live life to the fullest. The action comes and goes in this story throughout but the story is actually about Tyra's transformation. She still has to go through a few key points, before she can, hopefully, settle down to that reward at the end.
Aardvark
"Happiness is when what you think, what you say, and what you do are in harmony."
Mahatma Gandhi
"Happiness is when what you think, what you say, and what you do are in harmony."
Mahatma Gandhi
WOW !!!!
Anything more would be superfulous; anything less would be inadequate.
"All the world really is a stage, darlings, so strut your stuff, have fun, and give the public a good show!" Miss Jezzi Belle at the end of each show
BE a lady!
Comment?
I can barely think let alone comment as has been said WOW! Keep up the fantastic work.
Names
Two series running at the same time with characters named "Urban"? :) What are the odds of that? Once in a Blue Moon? Which is another story, actually... :)
Keep up the good work!
- Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
FILM
Can't get the idea out of my head that this story would make a damn good film. If I ever win the lottery, I might even finance it myself...............so sorry Aardvark.................NO CHANCE of that happening. Keep up the good work anyway.
love
charis
This story just keeps getting better
Another excellent chapter, this story has been action packed and a great read from the begining with each chapter upping the ante. I love the fact that I find a new chapter almost every day, it keeps the story flowing while it is fresh in one's mind plus I can be very greedy when a story hooks me like this one has. I was so afraid when I read the synopsis that this was the last chapter and I breathed a huge sigh of relief at the end to know there was more to come.
Kindest regards, Talon
This story definitely cries
This story definitely cries out to be made into a movie. A really good Sci-fi, action film, yet it also has a good basis for an action "chick flic". Jan