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Deep Into That Darkness Peering Part-8
Wonder how Raven will defeat her father without the Titans?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Her Father
He's not the bad guy in this story.
Prey, and finding you are not the top of the chain.
I hope Rachel is able to gain more control over her inter demon soon, before it hurts anyone else and leaves her with the guilt. Still I don't feel sorry for Brody, things like him are not right and it is a sad fact that they are hiding among the rest of us, preying on those they feel they can control. Hopefully this will put an end to him at this school and land him in jail.
Scum like Brody
Unfortunately there are a lot of scumbags out there like Brody. She took one down a peg...but he's one of a million or so :)
I told ya things weren't
I told ya things weren't boding well. ;)
Stuck with an ex cheerleader for a roommate. I can't imagine what the conversations are going to be like. Though, I like the occult class.
~Lili
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~Lili
Write the story that you most desperately want to read.
The Roommate
Remember Buffy's annoying college roommate...I was thinking about her when I wrote that in. I think Angelina will be making an appearance in the next chapter :)
Oh god... yes, I remember
Oh god... yes, I remember that evil evil woman. Even I was saying she was a demon before it was actually revealed. "If you can believe in life after love, after love.... GAH! I never listened to that song again after that episode.
~Lili
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~Lili
Write the story that you most desperately want to read.
Great chapter. I wonder if
Great chapter. I wonder if 'Dr. Occult' is going to teach her how to controll whatever it is that is inside her.
Control
Control is the ideal word here. He will try to help :)
Training
Rachel could certainly do with a few extra-curricular classes from the good doc on how to more effectively (a) use her powers, and (b) fight back against her (literal) inner demon. In a situation like that, it would be useful to throw the potential assailant away - perhaps with a "You didn't see me" suggestion - but without further injuring them.
Obviously, she's not going to be able to completely defeat / vanquish the inner demon, but being able to more effectively fight back before the killing instinct arises would definitely be a bonus and make her life more tolerable.
There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Her Inner Demon
Her inner demon will probably always be there but its learning to control that demon...that's going to be the interesting thing :)
wow
I presume Dr. John Dee.
Is he giong to help Rachael with her powers?
Help
There's a possibility :)
What a rush. Well written EoF
This is getting more gripping and interesting by the word.
Joani
Dance, Love, and cook with joy and great abandon
The Rush
The Rush hasn't begun. There is a lot of interesting stuff on its way.
Hopefully the good doctor
Hopefully the good doctor will help her with the thing she has imprisoned in her head.
Edit: lol, I should read all the comments before posting one.
Excellent stuff...
...as always. :-D
I just fell foul of the dreaded bug closet downtime and lost (I think) the comment Inhad all written out.
This happens to me quite a lot considering the downtime seems to happen at the same time everyday...you'd think I'd have learnt my lesson by now. Sigh.
Anyway, in case my last comment isn't there when I leave this new post page, it had something about me being glad that Ryan was finally going to (hopefully) get some much needed guidance.
And also something about me wondering if there were any plans for a John Constantine retcon. And then a snide comment slagging off the Keanu version. ;-)
Constantine
Lynceus actually retconned Constantine :(
Speaking of Lynceus
Is he active nowadays? Or he's on another of his breaks?
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Lynceus?
I think he's on another one of his breaks :)
Oooh! I'll check that out...
...thanks! I'm looking forwards to seeing how the sarcastic scouser translates. :-D
Side Character
He or rather she appears as a side character in one of his magic stories...I'm not sure which one :)
Books of Magik I think...
Books of Magik I think...
Great chapter, thanks for
Great chapter, thanks for sharing. I'm intrigued about Dr Ocsult's role in this and what the light is going to do, I'm also still mourning Katie, I think she'd have accepted Rachel as a girlfriend.
I wonder if Dekota will question her about Brody as it's bound to be news on campus, knowing the kind of guy Brody is it wouldn't surprise me if he didn't try to report Rachel for attacking him. That is if he doesn't leave college out of fear.
Looking forward to more
Lizzie :)
Bailey's Angel
The Godmother :p
The Outcome
The outcome of the Brody incident will appear in the next chapter definitely. I think you're right about Katie too, she definitely would have accepted Rachel.
Deep Into That Darkness Peering
As always I enjoy your writing. looking forward to more!
Thanks
Hopefully the new chapter will be up in a day or two :)
Well done!
I loved the fact that it was Ryan's guilt over Katie's death that helped Rachel control the demon. I'm interested in the effect that the Prof has on her. I'm really looking forward to more!
Wren
Emotions
Raven's power has always been based on her emotions. Her guilt was strong even to shatter the bit of control the demon had but at the same time we saw exactly what her anger could do. I think she needs to get them under control and fast.
Another excellent chapter
By the way, Brody's an idiot. "Let's try to get revenge on the chick with the mind control powers!" Way to use your head dude. Never stop to think she could something much worse than make you give yourself a swirlie.
Then again, anger (as Rachel has demonstrated) can completely destroy a person's sense of reason. That demon also should have figured out by now that bringing up Katie in any conversation with Rachel is going to destroy any argument it makes in favor of murder. Of course, no one ever said demons were particularly smart. Or are even capable of understanding something like love or guilt. I'd imagine those are pretty foreign concepts to them (Trigon certainly doesn't have any qualms about murdering his daughter in any of the source materials for example).
Her Anger
Her anger is going to be a real problem for her. She did a few stupid things when she was angry, hell she was angry at Katie and look what happened. She's definitely going to have to get those emotions in check or else bad things will happen.
Damn it girl!
I can't believe Rachel was dumb enough to use her power so blatantly ( when she sent Brody put his head in an urinal). How could she not realize it was going to backfire horribly? She better get her act together if she wants to survive.
Her Act
Its going to take a bit for that...after all, she still doesn't have a grasp on these powers yet. They are very dangerous and she's going to need to learn how to control them soon.