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is always a wonderful sight! ^_^
*Huggles*
Thanks Sexy Girl;)
I'm always glad to put one of these stories up. Thanks so much for reading and enjoying it.
*Huggles*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
I would enjoy this more
If I knew what happened between Images 20 and this new post 28. I can't find the links anywhere, and this posting has no link back to previous chapters.
I'm not sure
about that? I've got all my links here. You might have to ask Erin or someone ?
Bailey Summers
I just went back
to make sure I hadn't forgotten anything, and had no problems. Everything worked fine here!
Wren
I Just Re-Read
...26 and 27 without any link trouble. Are you using the default screen setup?
Eric
Grins
A little "jailhouse" justice was served :D. Glad that ass troy got what was coming to him.
Grins back
with the guys that Taylor grew up with and guys that hang around the family like Davey there's just things that get solved.
I'm glad you liked the story and thanks for commenting.
*Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
well he got...
most of what he deserved.
his father still needs to get hit with hate crime lawsuits for the website mess.
great chapter as always.
thanks
Thanks Lonewolf:)
Yeah but most importantly to Billy and Davey he won't be playing football anytime soon and this is graduating year. The father will be seeing legal action for sure. Jenna's dad isn't going to let this go.
Thanks for reading and the great comment.
*Hugs and howls*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Ya know, maybe sometimes life IS fair
Stupid f****r got what was coming to him-I hope they kicked his nuts so hard he has ovaries.
Well done. Like I say, if you can make your readers feel it, drag them kicking and screaming, into the story-that's good writing. Why ain't you getting paid?
Damn good stuff, Bailey!
Luv ya!
Wren
Sometimes there's those
stand up guys even though some kind of think they're bad guys they're tough and loyal to their friends and even more so to the people they call family.
I get paid with the comments from amazing People like you Wren:)
*Huge Hugs*
Luv ya too!
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Finally got caught back up...again
I love this story. You put so much feeling into it. Troy is a spoiled brat, but we did get some questions answered. Why Ingrid outed Jenna and the truth behind what happened afterwards. Troy did learn however a very important lesson. No matter how tough you think you are, there are people you simply don't screw around with. Folks that think prison is nothing more than a rite of passage. There is bad and then there's badddd. Nice to see too they caught the initial attack on vid. That should explain everything.
Beautiful story!
hugs
Grover
Thanks Grover!
I'm glad that this story still has the appeal and fire it still had when it started. I know a lot of prison guys that are baddd but on their flip side they're angels. Davey though, no body messes with the people he loves.
Thanks for the great comment and for reading:)
*Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Good to See Some Justice
Darn, it's been a long time. I had almost forgotten, but it took one sentence to bring it all back. Troy probably got less than he deserved, but it will be satisfyiing to see him suffer for a long time.
Bailey, this is a wonderful story.
Portia
Portia
I'm glad that you enjoyed it Portia
It took me awhile to get back to this but I had the first third of it hanging around awhile. I'm glad that you like the story and commented it's always a treat for me.
*Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
I Would Love To See Troy Lose Any Football
Jenna's going to clue in about what he said.
Troy sort of let more than one cat out of the bag when he mouthed off and sooner or later that's going to lead to Jenna seeking out a resolution with Ingrid. Natalie...If you've ever seen the whole 9 Yards then the french girl that was the dentists wife, the way she acted. That's Natalie.
Troy though.
Troy's in his last year of High-school football and he's all busted up and won't be able to play, then add in the charges and the bad press....Yeah he might not be going anywhere.
I'm glad that you enjoyed this so much and wrote such a great comment.
*Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
forgive me but
I found myself cheering that that so-and-so got what he deserved.
Dorothycolleen
I'm so glad and moved
that you read all of this so much, so fast Dorothy Hon and commented that much too. It was really, really appreciated and something not a lot of people would do. One of the things that I've always liked was setting this in Edmonton even though it's been nearly fifteen years since I was out west.
*Huge Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
edmonton setting
you should have them do a shopping trip at West Edmonton Mall, or do the tacky tourist stuff around town...
Dorothycolleen
I was sort of planning on doing that.
There's a lot I loved about that city and still do. There's a lot of places in Canada I've been that are so incredible. I'm planning in the future some Quebec time for SRS time for Jenna and the Maritimes for when they go to see the grandparents place and Angie's family too.
Maybe there'll be an Jenna and the girls shopping trip in the future:)
Thanks for the Idea Dorothy.
*Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
one place I would love to see mentioned
is the river valley. Its just so beautiful and calm and so un-city like.
Dorothycolleen
It might not be...
Justice by any legal definition, but as vengeance it certainly passes muster, and on a personal level I do actually approve...
On another note, I have to mention that the quality of your writing is such that I find myself becoming deeply involved with your charactters. Brilliant, and I'm glad to see more of it!
Thanks!
Thanks so much Abby.
I'm so glad that you like the characters that I've been writing for. I'm really lucky to have you and people like you reading and commenting inspiring me on. there's nothing like reading comments to get you past a writers block.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Neat Justice Bailey!
I somehow think that Troy baby will not be bothering Jen again, good riddance the to scumbag.
Good one Bailey.
LoL
Rita
Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)
LoL
Rita
There's Justice then there's
the law, Troy's eighteen and has no criminal record and has decent connections through family and sports. As bad as the charges might have been given those favors in his advantage the guys knew he wouldn't get legally punished anywhere near what he should have gotten for the abuse and pain that Jenna had gone through.
I'm so glad that You liked this one and always glad when you comment.
*Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
I don't like violence...
But in this case I'll make an exception.
Did Jenna let it slip that he was juice on steroids in the hospital, they could do some test for that when he to it and Bye Bye scholarships.
Way to go Bailey for another super installment of one of your super stories.
Love and Peace
tmf
Troy's seen the last of his football days.
unless it's come from a very whitebread christian school...most won't touch the scandal and the rest won't touch him for the injuries.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers