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I would venture a guess that
.... the date with Sile is off :)
I am still pretty perplexed as to motivation. Kimme/Ken is getting the mushroom treatment and I hope s/he gets his/her revenge for being put through the wringer.
Kim
Oh gracious!
Thanks for the great laugh Kimmie. I haven't heard anyone refer to the "mushroom treatment" in a long time. I wonder how many of the younger readers (sorry) have never heard of it.
For those of you who are young and or innocent, it means keeping someone in the dark and throwing excrement (different word, 4 letters, usually used) at them. I first heard it while in the military about 45 years ago.
Why yes, I AM a surly old curmudgeon thank you very much,
Chris in CA
Chris
Kim/Kimmie's family are a disgusting bunch of two-faced liars...
IMHO
-- grin --
What the FUC* was that all about? This not so accidental transformation.
All the writing lighting up on Ken a few chapters back hinted at some power or spirit sealed-up.
But to re-seal up this dangerous female spirit, Kimmie, as a woman?
HUH?
What the hell game are they playing?
It's like they care nothing for their own kin, just that their plan apparently going on since Ken was born is not upset. They talk like they want her as some prize broodmare.
Time to call on Sile's help and maybe Morgan's and un-seal her spirit and that of Ken.
What did they do, breed one of their own with a demon or a kitsune to gain some of its power thus the necessity of the binding spells that nearly failed?
His/her pain, nothing important. Just stick to the plan. He/she is nothing but a pawn to be lied to.
I say Kimmie, find Sile, get her help and blow this popsicle stand.
That is unless I totally misread this and this seemingly cruel treatment is the only way to save the child.
But why then the lies. Why can't they tell the child he/she is demon tainted or half Dark Unseen?
Something doesn't add up and it smells to me like Ken/Kimmie is simply a tool for the families' greater plans. His/her welfare/wishes/desires be damned.
Poor kid. His protectors failed and why, because his own family betrayed him/her.
Uncaring bastards the lot of them in particularly Aya, grandmother and whoever this Mistress Aya talked to on the phone is.
Who needs the Dark Fey as enemies when you have your own supposedly *good guys* family to back stab you.
Like I said before, maybe I am misreading this but this was at best businesslike and mechanical handling of a family member's misfortune or it was a long calculated, selfish, cruel power grab that used him/her as a tool and no more. And what was this about unseen swords and scabards?
Who are the real monsters indeed. I'd say some of her family are the real monsters and many of the rest are too timid to object as proper family should.
VERY good tale so far.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Who are the real monsters indeed
Love to tell you but it would spoil the surprise, thanks for reading :)
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
dark fae
Who needs the Dark Fey as enemies when you have your own supposedly *good guys* family to back stab you
eh? no one said they weren't dark fae, although their probably not.. but still.
I wonder what really happened
I wonder what really happened to his first girlfriend. Maybe Ken's family took her out or something. It really looks quite evil right now.
Great story, thank you for writing,
Beyogi
Convoluted, but Great!
You make me work to follow your plot. I have to reread older posts and research Japanese terms (kind of like Googling Sidhe terms in "The Forest") just to completely understand the story. For some reason, that seems to add to the experience. Your work is refreshing, and the plot twist are a lot of fun. I truly enjoy your writing and hope you continue for a long time.
Thanks,
Larimus
What to lose indeed...
Freedom of choice, for a start. But that's only *if* the Umeki family is as traditional as I suspect they are about arranged marriages, amongst other things. It doesn't seem that the family elders have much concern over what the younger generation thinks of them, just so long as they jump when they're told to. If that's what you were refering to when you chose the title "Who are the Real Monsters?", I agree whole heartedly. With "friends/family like that, who needs enemies?"
Peace be with you and Blessed be
Traditional
You are correct the Umeki family is very traditional
Thanks for reading
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
That's what I was afraid of...
Unless (s)he gets some rather strong and very *real* friends in the near future, I worry for him/her.
Peace be with you and Blessed be
That's what I was afraid of...
You are correct, if you noticed she is emotionally isolated. Being pulled from Hawaii (believe what Aya said to Katie if you want or not) it removed her from a familiar place causing her to fall back to her family for support. They might not all be warm and responsive but she is getting support.
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
lying
yeah there has been some serious lying going on in this family for a long time.
great chapter, looking forward to whatever you have planned next.
thanks
Seriously....
If it were me I wouldn't be so accepting of things, can't she see that people are hiding things?
Other Worldly Guardian
Is more or less the literal translation of Yo-kai-Hogosha. Tojiru ceremony means the closing ceremony. So this is not done yet. I have to agree that poor Ken/Kimmie is being used and betrayed. I also suspect that his friend in Hawaii was also dealt with in an harsh manner since I think she was a type of shifter too.
It does fall in the Asian traditions that the children are no more than assets for the family, but this is far too much. This is blatant betrayal.
Since it said 'other' Yokai-Hogosha family and her parents travel so much, they might be monster hunters of some sort. Possibly they adopt young 'Yokai' into their family to breed them to become stronger which is seems to be happening here.
This does make me think, but in a good way! Sometimes the good guys ain't so good, and besides I've always had a soft stop for the monsters. Girl, go kick your family's ass!
Hugs
Grover
Good Question
Good questions, who is on Kimme side? Glad your liking the story and thanks for reading.
*hugs*
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
Strangeness
All three senior members of the clan appear to be scheming so-and-sos, doing what they regard as best for the clan without informing anyone as to what's going on - and I doubt they'll willingly volunteer some crucial information even at the ceremony, leaving Kimmie to work it out for herself.
There also appears to be a rigid hierarchy: Sachiko --> Aya --> Rika --> everyone else.
Ren's father was apparently imprisoned overnight - so presumably the pair of them knew something was up and were determined to try and interfere.
This quote seems rather ominous - they've known about a certain aspect of Ken since birth, and have been planning for Ken to change forms (presumably not the standard were change, as we know from other cases - and presumably Ken's relatives - that happens at sixteen). They apparently believe that if Ken had changed forms 'naturally', (s)he would have escaped and (in their view) become dangerous to the entire family.
We learn of the true reason for Katherine being left behind in Skogshaven:
It sounds as though Aya doesn't have any special love for Skogshaven, and would prefer to get out of there asap. However, regardless of their plans for Kimme, unless she's effectively confined to the family home and shrine until the ceremony (after which they'd stick her on a plane back to Hawaii), they won't be able to watch her 24/7. No doubt given any chance whatsoever, she'll try and spread the word to others outside the family - there's no way she's going to be the submissive, compliant girl they presumably want her to be without either a mind-wipe or making her life a living hell.
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Who are the Real Monsters? Chapter 7
They seem to have forgotten that Ken/Kimmie was not given a choice and very well might rebel, or commit suicide
May Your Light Forever Shine
Sorry, but why even speculate about suicide?
...there's nothing, however frustrating for Kimmie, that would indicate anything so tragic and hopeless to indicate self harm. Are you serious?
Love, Andrea Lena
Please keep in mind that this...
Is a family steeped in Japanese tradition, even if the younger generations look at it as a bother more than anything. Seppuku may well be considered an option here if Ken/Kimmie doesn't find any ways out of this.
Also, Ken's/Kimmie's head is going to be messed up as all get out by all of this, if it goes "according to plan," but eventually fails again. It wouldn't suprise me if (s)he goes insane at some point if it keeps up. I really worry about this poor kid's future.
Peace be with you and Blessed be
Suicide, I can't see it
Except maybe ritual suicide by Aya or one of the other main suspected villains here IF their plan for Kimmie fails. If they are THAT *traditional* in their beliefs then they might do it to *save the family honor*. HAH! Like there is ANY honor in this family.
I can see Siles having a fit if she finds out. Ken was possibly becoming her lover and the murder of her lover several centuries ago was a reason she sided against the Dark Fey who by her nature she should have aided.
And Ken though likely stuck as Kimmie by the first *ceremony* -- or Kimmie is now the defalt form and Ken can only come out at times, like Kimmie previously was -- has not yet been subject to the second or final one and has retained control of her will for now. The glowing tattoos? of a previous chapter indicate some binding ceremony was used on Ken/Kimmie long ago.
The grace of his dancing suggested he had a strong affinity to his Kimmie form or even was born Kimmie and magically changed. Who knows?
Kimmie still has her free will though is still too willing to do as asked. Can she fight of the last magics and be herself if she can't ever be himself again?
Ken needs justice. Kimmie needs to have a life of her own choosing.Does anyone in the family truely love him/her?
But His/her spirit is strong. I can't see her killing herself. But maybe fighting back... eventually? Possible.
And like another speculated I wonder about the Hawaiian girl. Just a throwaway character or was she a victim of the family plan? They feared she would learn the secret so they had her *removed* from Ken in some way?
I could still be wrong here and our authoress has led us up a false trail. But it would take a lot to convince me this was done out of love and having no other choice to save the child. It all seems a cynical power grab by *the family* to me.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Unreasonable relatives
I think from Ken's POV his relatives were simply being unreasonable and not abusive. There was no reason to rebel other than the small things he did. Ken after all did grow up with these traditions and accepted them as normal.
However like John said this is something completely different. Cynical power grab is right! There is no concern for Ken's well-being. Ren and his father had something planned it seems, and Kathy appears sympathetic as well. The way The Family is spoken of it sounds like the Mafia or the Yakuza.
We can only hope Kimmie begins to see though the lies. A room just happens to be ready. Your cousins just happen to have clothes. Can their mouths open without telling a lie?
If you wanted to build suspense you're certainly doing a good job of it!
hugs
Grover
unreasonable and not abusive
They might be unreasonable parents, but they are still her parents.
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
Sile
Reading all these one chapter at a time, I keep losing chain of thought (I often have trouble working up a good link, much less a whole chain). I have to go back and read them in entirity, one at a time, in order of release, and when I did, I started putting a few things together.At first, I didn't realize The Other Side of the Forest was a Dark Realms story. So, I didn't place them together. It finally clicked (yes. I'm slow) The vampire bad girl and the town historian are the same person. Excellent work.
Thank You
Thanks, I'm glad your liking the story. Thanks for reading.
-Elsbeth
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
Confused
I’m not really sure exaclty what’s going on
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna