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Leon Hawkins
Hmm, I now suspect that Leon Hawkins, unknown were-type and father of Mikaela is also the man responsible for killing Leo and is the person who met Mikaela at the fountain. I also suspect that he is now actively protecting his daughter against his present or former employer who I suspect is Mrs Pratchett from the Coven and her minions. Of course I could also be totally off base here :) since I am only guessing from all the info I have gathered and infered from all the sources available.
Hmmmm
Except for the very obvious age difference, my first thought was her father was the old lore keeper Leo. But that doesn't work. My next is that the unknown cloaked man is her father and protecter. Just how many of these men in black can infiltrate this town before they are really noticed? There are a ton of unknown, new residents floating around to be the bad guys. And how tricky, killed by silver arrows in a dark alley? Kewl. I'm surprised the arrows didn't just zip right on through, over- penetrating the bad guys, to vanish safely taking all evidence with them. Mom is pretty calm, already knowing about the best food, and how handy, a bottle of bubble bath in her hands. Everyone but the kid seems to know a lot more of what is going on than they are hinting at. Hawkins, and Ravens, and crows....there has to be some connection in all the predator birds here. Another type of lesser were about to be introduced?
Mom's Wisdom
Mom may have been to Ravencrest before, who can say. But, I think her mom decided to play with a poker face to keep her daughter calm as well. And who wouldnt want to take a bubble bath mix with you to your kid if they need it?
Drakira
Tell Me Your Secrets, Chapter 10
Could Mikaela be able to morph into the were forms of both of her parents?
May Your Light Forever Shine
More questions
We keep getting more questions and not so many answers!
hugs
Grover
As the Prophets Would Say...
"You arrive with questions. There are always questions."
Questions are the beginning of wisdom, you just have to ask the right one.
Drakira
It would be the attack I would be concerned with
But who would be law enforcement? How would she describe them? I would talk to the witches or at the very least plan for a place to lie low. Clearly they know where she lives now and needs help.
Kim
An excellent chapter with
An excellent chapter with some interesting twists and turns. Witches and weres and hunters oh my!
Her mother is certainly a hoot. Way to help your daughter right off the bat with no blinking.
I know I am a bad person, but even more so because when I saw Leon Hawkins the first thing that popped into my head was Leroy Jenkins!
I am a bad person.
Heather
We are the change that will save the world.
LoL!
Wow, I never thought someone would use that old WoW reference. Points for you using it! I will admit, I did play it. Although now, I'm playing STO and am wishing that I can get Guild Wars 2 soon.
Drakira
I thought it was a refrence to someone else at first...
I'm just glad it wasn't a Leon Scott Kennedy reference, as that would have rather unfortunate implications for the fate of Ravencrest.
Peace be with you and Blessed be
Nope, just a coincidence.
This name I thought up on the spot. Leon for the director of NCIS, Leon Vance, and Hawkins, a name that I use for a few of my online characters.
Drakira
Just a flesh wound...
Does any one else feel a bit weirded out by the fact that someone who just got pulled into an alley by 4 thugs, beaten, knifed, threatened with death and then watched 3 of them murdered would blindly open the door and not check who it is first?
Lorekeeper
Was her dad the Lorekeeper or was her dad a hawk.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna