I don't know why it took me so long to get to this. But I've just read all 7 chapters without a break and the only word to describe them is enthralling. I particularly liked the way you grounded the use of magic in reality (or rather realities) but didn't labour the point. The introduction of two characters who make Beavis and Butthead look like distinguished academics adds an extra dimension - not that this tale needs any! - and promises to be a rich source of humour. I'd have baulked at the idea of creating two co-existing realities, and here we are with four. Best of British to you, Erin.

Thanks also to the poster who came up with the phrase 'chaos leak' because that's what attracted me to the story. The teaser would have had touch the light's eyes out on stalks, but Nicki Benson is an altogether less shallow individual.

(Checks the length of her nose...)