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Classic Punishment, But Still Fun To
See how it plays out. At least he will survive, even if his image is a bit tarnished.
May Your Light Forever Shine
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sisters punishment
wow fun cris seem redy to go aloung with his sister on a count of her girl friend relly good story but kinda short but sweet ,have a good one ,and keep going oldhippie60s@yahoo.com
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verry good story i wood love to see a lot more of this all i can say is wow verry good thanks for shareing
Reply to whildchild!
Hi, whildchild!
Yes, Chris does seem to be going along rather docilely, and he is definately enjoying Gwen's ministrations. Gwen seems to be enjoying herself, too!
Thanks for your comment!
-- SD
Reply to stanman63
Hi, stanman63!
I will likely not be writing more to this tale. It is intended as an open-ended, make-your-own assumptions sort of story.
Thanks for your comment!
-- SD
Why not a ...
... contest: Best ending? It should be approximately as long as this beginning.
"All the world really is a stage, darlings, so strut your stuff, have fun, and give the public a good show!" Miss Jezzi Belle at the end of each show
BE a lady!
Reply to Jezzi
Hi, Jezzi!
I have always given tacit approval to anyone who wishes to rewrite, continue, or reimagine any of my TG work. My only caveat is they acknowledge the source, if possible. "Sister's Punishment" is one story I have not thought much on a sequel, or continuation. I often write things as open-ended. I know this can feel like a cheat to my readers, but to be bruatally honest ... I write for myself first, others second.
But, I fully understand the frustration of desperately wanting to see more of a certain tale. I read several authors who have only written the first little bits of a story making me crave more and never getting it. Or, getting them sloooowly. Teehee
Then, when the new parts come, they do not match up with the personal continuations devised in your head and a sense of let-down can happen.
So consider me as doing my part to avoid giving you let-down! ^.^;;
Thanks for your comment!
-- SD
Welcome back, Demi!
As you said, it's been a long time, and I'm very glad to see that you're still around and still in the groove.
Um, does this mean you might add to, or finish some of your older stories sometime soon? *giggle*
Huggles from,
Catherine Linda Michel (used to be Cathy_t_)
As a T-woman, I do have a Y chromosome... it's just in cursive, pink script.
Reply to Catherine Linda Michel
Hi Cathy!
I may add to some of my older stories. I have a few which are old, but never seen by the public. I also recently found several type-written pages futhering the adventures begun in my story, "The Bet". Too, I will be doing more BLSB cartoons, and may try to come up with a way to consolodate all the ones I've done over the last 10-15 years ... wow some of them are ooooooold!
I don't know what I plan to do, actually. Just that the creative juices have been flowing and I now have time and a bit more security to extend that creativity to TG style stuff.
Thansk for the comment!
-- SD
Interesting concept, but I
Interesting concept, but I really can't see a principle going for this type of open punishment especially if the parents are not there to condone it. I also believe that, even tho Chris's sister is "almost" 18, she is still NOT an adult and even if she was, this type of punishment would be really crossing a line. She is setting her brother up for more than humiliation. Just my sense of this activity. J-Lynn
Reply to J-Lynn
Hi, J-Lynn!
Of course no Principal would go for this. The story was written, and intended, as pure fiction. A fantasy of mine, if you will.
I write almost all of my stories with myself in place of the protagonist, knowing full well most of what I write would never happen in the real world. Nor should it. Repercussions from such actions, in reality, would be harsh and dangerous for all involved. If this were a realistic story, and Chris' sister dressed him up and sent him to school, not only would he likley be beaten by other kids, she would be talking to police and social services would be stepping in very quickly. The parents would be in a world of trouble once they were reached and returned.
Think of it like going to a movie. There are things that just stretch credibility and are to be taken with a healthy does of imagination and suspension of disbelief. Just as we can enjoy the fantasy of a kid swinging around on webs and stopping crime due to a simple radioactive spider bite, we can enjoy the tales of crossdressing situations where the world turns a blind eye. ^.^
I'm not going for a Pulitzer. Just something those of like mind and inclination may find enjoyable or exciting. I often call my short stories "one-handed reading", if you get my drift. ~.^
Thanks for your comment!
-- SD
What fun!
.........and how many of us would volunteer??? First in the queue stands right behind me!
....But only if my hair gets fixed better tahan his!! Ginger xx
I would almost...
...go along with it the way this story started.
Great punishment for bullies
Very good story to where it finished. most likely no school would agree to impose suck a punishment. only a sister with a revenge purpose would think of such. Parent might of had a more severe reaction.
That said will there be a follow up of Chris's return to school and how some of his buddies reaction as well as some of the girls? Some of his fellow class mate have even come to his protection.
I would like to follow up (up dates) and does Chris have a personal change in being feminized.
Stephanie online name
Unlikely Followup
As you can see, there is no followup to this story. I haven't had much time or opportunity to much the last couple of years. :(
I am certain no reputable school would ever agree to such a punishment. Though, a private religious school I attended dabbled in petticoat punishment and sissification punishment for dress code violations; it did not last long. heh
I think it's safe to say...
Chris would get the crap beat out of him very badly. Nobody is going to care who is so-called protecting him. This would follow him for years, in and out of school. Though I highly doubt his sister cares. She seems to be more focused on hurting him than anything else.
In today's schools, I am not
In today's schools, I am not so sure Chris would have the crap beaten out of him. It would be a strong possibility. Good thing it is a wish fulfillment fantasy tale, eh? ;>
Unsure
I'm not sure what would happen when Chris returns to school -- beyond his getting in more trouble. Someone might beat the daylights out of him, and then the Principal suspends him or otherwise punishes him for getting into a fight. "Just walk away. It takes two to tangle."
Chris responds, "You can't possibly believe that crap. I walk away, and he jumps me from behind. It takes two to prevent a fight from becoming a no-holds-barred beatdown. I bet even then, you'd punish the victim being in a fight." Chris gets himself into more trouble, of course. He just doesn't learn to keep his mouth shut. He tries to write an article for the student newspaper on the issue, and it's rejected, or the Principal removes it in his role as editor-in-chief.
Much more ensues.
-- Daphne Xu
Sister's punishment
all of the comments and story is great!
One comment stated that a principal cannot authorize a punishment of that nature. There are many private schools and some smaller Public schools like agriculture schools that uses "Petticoat Punishment." I was a shy quite boy that hadn't been able to get a girlfriend. I was caught pulling a girl's ponytail. I had to wear girls clothes for two weeks. I was teased and picked on at first. A popular girl stood up for me when her boyfriend and his buddy shoved me down. I was a freshman in 1966. I am now married to that popular girl and still married to this girl.
Just Remember this, Just because you never heard of something, doesn't mean that it is fiction or false.
My area of schools still have petticoat punishment, but has to be approved by the parents.
The schools are not as strict as large schools. The teachers treat good students with respect. The students are able to socialize at lunch time and free to leave the building. With petticoat punishment the boys do not get into as much trouble.
Interesting fantasy
lovely
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Erin Amelia Fletcher