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Brianna's on for a Pledge...
I really like this side story idea. Thanks for going to the extra trouble of writing it.
Hugs, Jessie C
Jessica Connors
Absolutely!
and I hope you're enjoying the main story too!
I enjoyed the whole story,
I enjoyed the whole story, tears, laughed and all.
Kathleen
So far...
So far...
I have hated how they have treated Miles/Alison. They only care about reputations and their image, they humiliate him/her whenever possible, they torture him/her for fun under the guise of "helping" become a girl. So far, none had shown any care about what was inside Miles/Alison's head- until now. Only Brianna seems to actually care about Miles/Alison and wants to help, the others are trying hard to punish and humiliate and protect themselves.
I hope that this is the start of Brianna trying to make things right because she seems to be the only one who can save Alison from doing something terrible to herself to make the pain and humiliation that her "sisters" are heeping on her in the name of AG.
I'm told STFU more times in a day than most people get told in a lifetime
Brilliant!
I like this much better than a story with several viewpoints.
Well done!!
Monique.
Monique S
An absolutely great side story
It adds depth and nuance to the main story, and fleshes out Brianna so that she's a much more identifiable (sympathetic) player.
Wish the writers of "Solo: A Star Wars Story" had gotten your input prior to release!
Hugz! - **Sigh**
Sighs are the natural language of the heart.
-Thomas Shadwell
Nothing on this Earth
Could have saved Solo from the dumpster fire it was destined to become.
Answered some questions
This short sidestory answered a few questions, but might have served the whole story better if it had been inserted before Miles received the callback.
By inserting it before the callback, the reader wouldn't have wondered why the girls were treating Miles so harshly. It would also have showed the love Brianna actually had for Miles.
Others have feelings too.
Brianna
It's nice to see a side-story, showing the reactions to the events of a different person. In fact, that's much better than what is often done: insert the other viewpoint right in the middle of things in the story.
-- Daphne Xu
Well done
I loved the story, the surprises, the documents attached at the end.
Great job.
Hugs,
Kaleigh Wy
A great story to reread
I've reread all the Allison's story stuff recently after like four years ago when I didn't even have an account or proper identity. Thought I'd share how much I still enjoy Allison's story even if it was never finished in Allison's Test