I want to mention that some readers may object to the strong religious flavor of this story. I know a lot of readers here are non-believers. I am one of them. But for this story I am taking a very pro-religion tack, especially at the start. Hopefully a good story will keep people reading. Like always, this is an R-rated story, so those looking for a story to read with one hand will be disappointed.
Comments
Good story!
This was in fact and deed a good story. The first bit was really confusing until I realized that it was tracking back chronologically. Once I figured that out I luckily kept reading. Dawn, you say that you aren't religious but you show a great understanding of true Christianity. For what that's worth. I appreciated reading it.
PS: I read this one handed most of the time, though I occasionally used two when I turned my phone to landscape.
PPS: I read the printer ready version so figure +1 Kudos per part.