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Woo Hoo....
Followed by Whaaaa!!!???
Woah... a sympathetic ally for Reverend Englund... Now that is scary! =D
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As I mentioned before in one of the other chapter comments, I don't think the Rev. has been fleshed out enough in canon, considering the position he's in. This is my answer to his character development, Sangria. I still don't think he's a nice guy, but I think he deserves some sympathy for how he became that way.
~Lili
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~Lili
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Bad things
When enough bad things happen, you tend to see all of a given group as bad too. Sangria has seen a lot of evil from the old ones, and she is worse than the Rev. However I can actually see Brice striking up an unlikely friendship with Sara. They have so much in common it's scarey! Right down to the creepy eating habits! Yes, I did recognize that book! LOL Nicely done!
Hugs!
Grover
I so totally forgot to
I so totally forgot to credit the Titus Crow character. *meep*
Titus Crow is the lead character in The Burrowers Beneath, and others, Lovecraftian Horror stories written by Brian Lumley of Necroscope fame. I thought it apt considering the theme of Sangria...
Given what Sangria has seen and experienced, can you blame her? Nothing good has ever come out of the Old Ones or the Elder Gods. But I can't give away how this is going to play out, so you'll have to wait a little while to find out how they all deal with each other.
~Lili
Blog: http://lilithlangtree.tglibrary.com/
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~Lili
Write the story that you most desperately want to read.
Sangria and the Class X entities (sounds like an Ayla title ;-)
It is obvious that Sangria hates the Old Ones, and probably with good reason. Most of them are hostile and dangerous after all. So her first encounter with Sara might not go that well. And what about a certain blue-haired Star Stalker?
Methinks there is much room for tragedies in the Greek sense... but also for more interesting Sangria stories :)
Not to mention...
...Aunghadhail's also on campus - an Elder God. Oh, and the handmaiden of the Tao, which also plays a prominent role in Lovecraftian mythology.
As if that wasn't bad enough, wait until Parent's Day comes around and Señor Dominguez turns up!
And if that wasn't bad enough, wait until she discovers a bunch of former adversaries in the form of the New Olympians...
There are 10 kinds of people in the world - those who understand binary and those who don't...
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
On the last one
She did. It's the run-in with the Athena that prompted Braith to force the merger with Sangria.
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Well, about Sara and Sangria
I can see Braith closely examining, inside and out, both Sara and, once she learns of the blood oath, Nikki. It will be a thorough examination, hynecology exams would have nothing on it, and the results would be...
SFX: *muffled mewling, THUNK, sound of something heavy pulled along*
I never imagined that of all entities this one would interrupt!..
<_<
>_>
You didn't think it was me pulled away, right?
*Dramatic pause. echoing MWAHAHAHAHA. Aura of all-permeating evil*
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
O_o
This story is creeping me out...in a good way :-D
Can't wait to see what happens between Braith, Sangria and Sara!
-Christelle
"Fun-loving geek-chick who's addicted to sunlight!"
-Christelle
"Fun-loving geek-chick who's addicted to sunlight!"
Sangria
It can't end like this! More please.
GinNC
Adversity
So far Braith appears to act first then reason after. It has led to conflicts that could have torn her life apart.
In fact it has done this again; Instant dislike (through the Reverand) even though she has already met and spoken to Sara, albeit as an aside.
So a warning bell has sounded and a little more thought is going into the next issue even though the project ahead is extermination.
Sangria has a real feel for the evil but Sara has not rung all the bells, so what's different?
That's the trouble with
That's the trouble with those darn kids. They never use their heads first. ;) The question of what Sangria's feeling from Sara hasn't really been thoroughly examined. All she feels is evil power, but not the gut wrenching evil presence that makes her want to run in the other direction like the certain things. Beyond that, I can't say at the moment.
~Lili
Blog: http://lilithlangtree.tglibrary.com/
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/lilith_langtree
~Lili
Write the story that you most desperately want to read.
Will we hear more
Will we hear more of Sangria, her friends, and her time at Whateley? Awell written series, yet seems to lack an ending.