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Setting up for the end?
This story had me from the first sentence and hasn't let me go, I love that she isn't Mystique, and that she has a life to look forward to. Thank you sleethr
Draflow
Don't You Dare!
Don't you dare "set up the end" and finish this story quickly. I love the characters, the dialog, and the action. I want MANY more chapters! Seriously, I am enjoying this story immensely and don't mind waiting a bit for Whisper chapters if it lets me read more of this story.
Thanks,
Larimus
IANM..
I'm enjoying both your story lines Sleethr. I must admit that I've never been a fan of Mystique in the comics but your story has really gotten my interest and I look forward to every chapter!
YAY getting more and more
YAY getting more and more interesting:)
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Looks can kill or get you killed
Not sure the cops are too bright if they keep up the Mystique bit. They seem to only want to see her as the criminal Mystique regardless of evidence to the contrary. Likely they were or are going to announce that they captured the dangerous criminal Mystique though a hard and dangerous police raid, not that she turned herself in and that the gun was a prop. If they had any idea of Mystique's power set they would realize that they would never be able to catch a shapeshifter, wonder if she will ever be able to be rid of that name. Her real power set is much more powerful if not nearly as useful in everyday life. The public will never believe be convinced totally as they focus only on the negative and the media tends to downplay any retractions they have to make. Don't think she can totally hide that she has a second form unless she is lucky, lots of places have cameras. Tho their are some megas that could erase that trail.
In the same week!
Wow. Whisper and I am not Mystique. Keep it going1 :)))
So where are her other advocates?
The cops are barking up the wrong tree as they think she is a villain and they were the ones that had triggered her change by stressing her at exactly wrong time and they have no interest in weird mutant changes. Is she going to be always the misunderstood mutant for the rest of her days.
Kim
Yah know, crying might just be the thing
I doubt a hardened supervillain would cry or give away knowledge of a power she has. Like it was mentioned in a previous epi, if she had acted just like a vulnerable girl when she was confronted by Riddler then she would have been in the clear.
Kim
home bind point
can she set it without being there, or can she set it on a person?
I am sorry those cops were injured but they shot first, an i bet a lot of people have it on video.
great chapter, thanks
Gate
I am modeling it off of the EQ gate power that the caster classes had. They could set their "home bind" point almost any place. Sometimes that wasn't the smartest idea either.
But, they had to physically be at the location to set the "anchor".
-- Sleethr
I am NOT Mystique! - Chapter 10
Why do I get the idea that she is about to make them sorry for pulling that stunt? And why has Jade not shown up to help her?
May Your Light Forever Shine
Jade
has not made an appearance yet because she is busy and now that Mystique is a wanted criminal, the Green Lantern Corps rules would not allow her to help her. She would have to arrest her.
I think...
-- Sleethr
On the other hand Jade might
On the other hand Jade might interfere if she gets wind of the whole thing and it appears like the police wants to railroad her. That would a bad precedence that would encourage ugly/monstrous types of metas to go villian if ever accused of anything. I mean if you don't get a fair trial, why bother trying to stay on the light side anyway?
No, all parties involved need to play this by the law, or they might have future villians by accident go desperado on them.
Thank you for writing this captivating story,
Beyogi
I am NOT Mystique!
Great story!
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Cartman: A fine day of plundering we had boys. What about yourselves? Here you are lads, plenty of booty to go around. A round of grog for me boys. A round of grog for everyone!
Didn't really want to read this.
But once I saw the author's name, I decided to give it a try. My time was not wasted. You have developed a very nice story here that has depth, character development, and keeps my interest.
Thank you so much
Gwendolyn
Escape Skill
So the escape skill should be ready in about seven and half hours right since three minutes in the game would be about since you said each hour is a game minute right?
Skills
Be nice to work on mundane skills of escape too to back-up the magical ones. Having them think she escaped magically when she just slipped the lock would really throw them when she escapes a short time later.
ya know...
I totally forgot about that little detail and now I am having trouble even remembering what game had that mechanism. EQ?
I may have to continue forgetting that for Mystique's powers because I can't really think of a good real world reason to have that time factor in the story.
-- Sleethr