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A Verrrry Good Story
As I said very good
I suffer from severe anxiety and find it hard to communicate but feel that it must be said that this is an incredible tale and it would be a shame if it was left incomplete
daughter of lone star owner
it would be nice if you could expand the roll of the lone star owner's daughter, like maybe have her have trouble with the new girls and molly helps her which gets her to play peacemaker between her dad and shamus. as to the rape and pregnancy, they are both cliffhangers and cliffhangers drive me up the wall since i can't see a solution but i know you have one and i have to wait and i hate waiting. i just know that the wait is going to be worth it with your writing skills.
I believe our great writers
I believe our great writers have completed this story arch but are releasing it smaller digestible portions so we may enjoy it so much longer!!
Love it
Forry is completely evil,his come-up-ins should be truly epic! Trish's situation was inevitable, you can play only so long before payment must be made. I have been wondering from the beginning what "G_d" is for? Your not taking the Lords name in vane, in most instances of it's use.
A Quick Explanation
I'm Jewish, and I was taught that it's wrong to write the Lord's name out in full. So, when I write His name, I use a hyphen instead of the middle letter "o".
Just a quick comment.
This was tough to get through. I'm planning to leave a big comment talking about my thoughts reading your novels when I'm finished, but I had to stop and tell I really appreciated this chapter despite how hard it was to read. Thanks again for the novels and I look forward to reading that new Jessie story you mentioned earlier.