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the dark side of life, but some brightness too
very glad to see this story continue.
I rather like this story.
I just wish it was updated more frequently because my rapidly aging memory takes a time before I remember what it's about.
I was beginning to wonder, before we discovered the 'doctor' was probably phony, if Rain had been given Thalidomide with all the implications that might mean. Strangely, it was relief that instead she was effectively poisoned and almost died. I prefer to ignore pet animals and hope that if I leave them alone they'll respond similarly (I'm not an animal lover but would never harm one deliberately). Despite that I find Olive's new profession quite appealing and forecast a potential relationship developing between Olive and Colin (as well as Gnasher, as I think of her). That will, of course have its own drawbacks.
Thanks Kat.
Robi
Heh heh. I think you're a step ahead of me.
I've written a lot more, and I'm still polishing before posting.... but yeah, you've kind of intuited that the tragic animal becomes the bond that connects Olive and Colin - who have their own surreal journey ahead.
Apologies for how slowly this story is progressing. Every time I go back and read up to where I have stopped, I feel I can do better, and re-write without posting a thing.
Maybe I should just post the whole story from start to finish - however rough - and revise, revise, revise the posted versions as I get better ideas, instead of doing it offline and posting nothing for long stretches.
Thanks for sticking with my little story. I hope to make it worthwhile by the time I reach the conclusion (about the only thing I've finished and am happy with), and can not adequately express my gratitude for your patience.
K@
All caught up.
So I went back and started from the beginning and got to enjoy the story all over again. I hope the story will continue soon. Thanks for continuing this.