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Comments
Interesting start.
I am curious as to how things will work out..
Anne Margarete
Very good but, should be the
Very good but, should be the start of the real story.
alissa
So based on the comments that
So based on the comments that John's body healing is being based on a template that gives the person bright red hair and green eyes and he now looks exactly like his sister, that John is now fully female?
This first chapter does seem to be a really interesting start to a rather interesting story. I'm wondering if Ma'at isn't involved, as the Egyptian said "Mother, let them know about your Justice"; and she was the ancient Egyptian goddess of Justice and punishment.
Captain John begins a new story...
Why are others not recognizing his new future. People seem to be talking to him and not with him. Maybe I'm wrong.
Hugs on a new beginning, Jessie C
Jessica Connors
This could...
Become quite an epic story. Please continue.
Patrick Malloy
Wielding a magic sword
Nice! I hope this is only the prologue to the story
Karen