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"That’s different... that is very different... um... panic."
giggles. very cool start!
Heh
Ok, this has caught my attention. One question does obtain ... what the heck is going on that they'd repeat a ritual that resulted in their casters being mauled by what they summoned?!?
Interesting.......
To say the least. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
D
D. Eden
“Hier stehe ich; ich kann nicht anders. Gott helfe mir.”
Dum Vivimus, Vivamus
Confused Magic
This looks like fun. I look forward to seeing more. Please.
I was a little confused by the last scene. I think Allie moved to the new world and didn't split into two bodies. It's usually a complete transfer in this type of story. Hopefully, it'll be cleared up in the next chapter.
Thanks and kudos (number 29).
- Terry
I would have to say, beware
I would have to say, beware of spells that get you or another mauled; that is is not, at least in my opinion, the desire and affect that you are after.
Rip off both arms ? No, this
Rip off both arms ? No, this doesn't seem to be a soldier.
Karen
Presto !
As soon as that sheet was thrown back, a lot of old guys paid attention I'll bet.
Great start, The 250 pound hairy guy disappeared, an in his place..........................
Karen