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carson learns the wrong lesson...
As is perfectly in character from what I can tell, Carson has apparently not taken the right lesson from this. That being always look at the person you're passing judgement on. Also that the administration of Whateley is dysfunctional far too often.
Still, at least there some evidence of interference leading to the colossal fuster cluck instead of just Carson's arrogance and Cameron's bad luck.
Carson’s Lesson
It is difficult to portray a character that is not your own, especially when you put them in a light that everyone doesn’t expect of them.
Thank you, for having an interest and letting your imagination out to play.
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Camo
I am so glad to see thatyou are continuing this story. Just as I said when you were posting this story over at Whateley that everything started going wrong when our infamous Head Mistress played a mind game not making sure it was the student that she intended to do this with. As much as I love most of the writers over at that site the majority of the authors have given too many characters to much say in what with way too much outside influence. Everyone has their own agenda which means that there are way too many cracks for bad situations like this to happen. I truly believe Carson does have the best interests for every student who attends, but when there are so many outside influences Neutrality is just impossible to maintain. She cares too much about that Neutrality that it creates opportunity for extreme chaos. Camo please continue this story
SDom
Men should be Men and the rest should be as feminine as they can be
SDom
Neutrality is a difficult concept to effectively impart when a story requires conflict. You reminded me that Carson has a big heart, I’m trying hard to not cast her as something else. But I make no promise as to what transpires in the next chapter.
Thanks for the encouragement.
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High Level Plot
This is a very complicated tale and I wonder how it will all come out? I'm confused about Cameron getting steam rolled at Whately, when he'd previously demonstrated his ability to get on top of things. It is almost like someone was drugging him. And, who was the spirit who resurrected him? It seems that the Were, and the folks at Whately have any clue about that? Was this a carefully contrived test for him?
The fact that the story is not full on TG does not bother me at all because I have always felt that a good story would have more, so much more to it. In my own writing, I've tried to include other elements as well.
Thank You.
Gwen
Plot points
Herein lies my problem, I would love to answer all your questions, But then what story would I have left to write.
I will say however, When Cameron spoke with Fubar it was revealed why he was there.
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One tough job even without the detractors
How often has Whateley been attacked or someone at Whateley been attacked for one nefarious reason or another?
How many are they who would love to see Whateley shut down and every mutant buried somewhere out in the desert after someone tries to find out how they tick?
Mrs. Carson has been on someone's crosshairs more times than she should have been, whether the evidance was accurate or not. She have a tough enough job trying to care for kids that have gone through horrific experiences and coping the best they can while trying to keep others from killing them because of the changes they went thru.
Camron was just another tool in an ongoing effort to get Carson removed and someone put in her place who would work to help close Whateley. And they were trying this by trying to argue mental age and not chronical age? By that arguement, every person born with a mental defect which lockes them into the age of a child, if they are not mutants, would be that mental age even if they were fifty chronical years old.
In this chapter, the prosecutor didn't do diligence with their homework and got spanked for their lack of effort. Once again those going after Whateley and Mrs. Carson failed to cross their 't's' and dot their 'I's', and blew it. Thankfully.
Others have feelings too.
A tough job
Hi Jamie Lee
You have touched on a topic I have tried to explore in this story.
A person with limited mental faculties may not be viewed as progressing beyond a comparative age, it does raise a difficult question: they may not be fully enabled but should they be restricted or prevented from trying to achieve a full life?
I have a distant cousin with Down’s syndrome, nicest guy ever, but his parents love at times holds him back because of their wish to protect him.
In part, my story is an exploration of limits, self imposed and those put in place by others.
Thank you for your comment and interest in Cameron’s adventure.
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