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Awesome start
Great first chapter!
Love the horses name.
Lost Queen, I too have...
...stepped into your lost world. I like the world or story you have weaved. I'll see you in another chapter.
Yes, welcome back Elsbeth.
Hugs, Jessie C
Jessica Connors
Welcome back then, Elsbeth
Stuck in a "game" is not a rare idea, but I enjoy it, especially when as good as this. I will be logging in for the next chapter.
Teri Ann
"Reach for the sun."
Magical
I love the mood you are setting and the mixture of reality and the fantastic. I'm assuming Eleanor is about to find out about the other residents of this land. I wonder if the Lost Queen of the title simply refers to Eleanor's plight or who she is in this world. And what will a drost dagger do in this world? Or is it a dfrost dagger?
Fictional Historical Fantasy
Thanks for reading, I hope you will like the mix.
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
Wet Blanket
Well, Not really but: Something about bringing computer games into a story.. Originally I like the idea. But; Again Now a days you have the stats, points and what have you..
Your not the 1st.. This has started to get me upset.. What could be decent fantasy stories and movies.. Mythical.. Has turned into a sad charade to only hold interest of gamers.
I do enjoy your writings and Morpheuse's also. I am just an old grump!
a
alissa
Isekai Stories
Well it is a Isekai , which generally points to some sort of role-play element. In this story it's a MMORPG and in my other its a pen and paper game. You wont really see stats, there are game elements to be sure but ...
Anyway, if you want a more traditional fantasy, although there will be plenty of it here look at my story
The Sacrificial Boy (yes shameless plug)
Thanks for reading
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
different stories
I've seen a few translated Japanese stories where someone wakes up (or is born) in a fantasy world. There seems to be a whole community of people that like to translate Japanese literature so that we gaijin can enjoy it. It's pretty good stuff, and the style is interesting.
I like Sacrificial Boy. It showed up in my tracking page a couple days ago, so I reread it. It looks like I had only gotten to chapter ten, but now it is up to chapter twenty. It feels like it stopped in the middle, though.
Good start
I wonder if D&D 5e played a part in class inspiration. Interesting idea did she start out transgender or did the game make her trans because she said she liked playing Eleanor in the table top game. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
D&D 5e
Not specifically, although a friend of mine did teach me the new version. Much better than the last. Really, its a combination of rpgs from various sources so hopefully it feels right.
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
A very awesome start.
And, yay, a new LitRPG story. (LitRPG is a new genre where the characters seem to be in an RPG game and can apply skill points and call up status menus, etc.)
LitRPG story
Very much so, find them interesting. Death March is one of my favorites, although always found it odd when people the PC meet are talking about their level.
Thanks for reading
Is fearr Gaeilge briste, ná Béarla clíste.
Broken Irish is better than clever English.
And I'm re-reading this again.
I've re-read chapters 4 and 5 several times while waiting for more, but now I'm bored and decided to re-read the whole thing.
Like I've said before, this is an awesome story.
Same
I have one all of that also.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
Bored again.
Re-reading again.
We are not expecting the first chapter of volume 2 for another 2 day.
good story
I usually skip gaming stories since I believe that the things that make a good game and a good story are not necessarily congruous but I just read the first six chapters of this and enjoyed it so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters.