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An awesome author
Every time I see a new story by QModo I have failed to recognize the author. (I have a lousy memory these days.) But when I go to read the story I realize that I recognize some of the titles of other stories they have written. In fact, when I just went to add this story to my typed list of stories I want to re-read some day I found The Bliss was already on my list and it was in bold, indicating I particularly liked it. I think now would be a good time to re-read it again.
I find this story to be particularly awesome. I really like the way it is rambles like a real person might think. Like when he first wakes up here and there he's not remembering the changes to recent events. And his verbalized thoughts sound like how someone to whom English is a secondary language might think. This story is particularly charming and I would love to see a sequel.
Thanks for kind words
Thank you Willow. You are probably the first my admiror on this site.
Great job
What a sweet story! Not many grammar errors, but I would change "We started reconnecting equipment" to Disconnecting....
Fewer typos than many other stories. My only complaint would be for this to be longer...perhaps novel length.
Thank you
I'm glad you liked it.
Smart move,
Enjoy your new life and never look back.
I guess you liked it
Thanks. Your opinion is important for me.
Such a door...*sigh*
I couldn't begin to count how many of us could only wish to find such a door. To remedy a past we lived, undo the rejections of society, to have a shot at learning all the things we should have learned, but were forbidden... If I were certain this would be the outcome? I'd be through that door in a heartbeat.
I can say that I am glad there is no 'time warpiness' in the story... Can't say I'd be interested in the possibility of dating my former self.
So glad Victor was able to see the benefits of NOT proving whom he had been before.
Thanks for commenting
You have noticed it - "If I were certain". The gist is to step through, when there is no certainty.
A neat imaginative story...
liked it beginning to end, but was a little sad-sick when she was kidnapped. I was glad it was short-lived.
Jessie C
Jessica Connors
Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it.