1. I'd left Molly in the hands of Alicia, Michael's daughter is that a typo maybe Maggie instead of Molly.

2. The rest should understand that Harry was not going sit on his hands like that for long with. The acceptation of Murphy won't she/he take it well probably see it has "you don't respect my decision/choice" Murphy I guess hasn't learned a marry takes work and compromise/communication with your partner guess that's why all her marriages ended her Bullhead nature

3. Harry's anger/worry and temper should be directed at the people who caused it i.e. Murphy ignoring is concerns and points and the situation

4. Why do I think that when Harry catches up with the rest of them there's going be an argument with Murph

5.Maggie is also Susan responsibility it's not just on Harry to look after her

6. Susan's "looking after Maggie as long you like" may be a year for Susan and for Harry lifetimes/centuries if I understand the time difference correctly foreshadowing maybe?

7. "you and I both know when push comes to shove, Murphy, Thomas, Charity, and Michael will all give an adversary the benefit of the doubt." / "That is why they work on the side of the Light, Harry." / "Well, I know that Light can also be Grey at times too, Mac. Sometimes it's necessary to make the choice that is right instead of the right choice." this conversation explains why he should have gone with them in the first place he knows to expect the double cross from what lives in the Never-Never and won't hesitate to kill someone/thing to keep himself and his loved one safe.

8. here comes female elf Harry

hope the hiatus wont last for long can't wait for more!!!