Hi Julia, thanks for commenting. As a first-time author here that is my mistake. I thought I could upload the file and BC would format it like another fiction site does. I then reposted it in story editor, but it was deleted. I was hoping that the admins would let readers choose, if I was lucky, of if they did delete one, they'd pick this, the first attempt. Perhaps I can find a way to re-do this chapter the right way, as I have more chapters ready and want to make them as easily accessible to as many people as possible. I'd like people to have the same access for all chapters, now that I've learned a lesson. I'm glad you got it to open on your iPhone tho! Thanks for taking the extra effort. Hope you liked this little opening tease and that you'll look for future chapters. Best wishes! Suzi B. Queen