Hi there,

I was suggested to post this sample on this site to see what people think of it.
I'm not a writer, and I've never really been creative, but I wanted to see if I could get some feedback for this story.

This is the story about Jacob Parnival. Jacob is a normal teen, and he has a twin sister, and an adoptive mother and her wife.
One day Ellen, Jacob's sister asks him for what she thinks is a very docile favor, but this leads Jacob down a spiral eventually leading to risks that endager his life.