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What a mess
Whoever has made of Hannah's mind. If it's all down to "Dad" meddling then he isn't a nice person to be so careless with the effects. Hold on to your sanity, miss.
Teri Ann
"Reach for the sun."
A very big one
From what was earlier the mind wipe tend to mess peoples. Now you mess some one with an army of past mind and so mush magic at hand.
Nessa you give us some superb intrigue of mind, family and magic, Thanks.
Hugs tmf
"I hurt Sarah.."
wow. a tough one to read
Hannah
Her golden light seems to reverse entropy if it's not time reversal I would think the entropy one would cause less trouble just adding energy to match an original state of being whereas time travel can mess up the universe either one will attract attention I'm sure, so at some point will we start to get an idea what's going on? I'm enjoying the story just wondering about these weird characters who seem to want something and now her dad, keep on writing please we need to get to the bottom of all this.
Tears...
It's such a goddamn sad chapter. Her dad messing with her mind and screwing up her memory of Things She Should Know, accidentally hurting people, hyper-focusing in her fear and Actually hurting sarah.
I want sarah :'( poor hannah.
I'm crying too :'(
Xx
Amy
What very big hurt Hannah Tears..
Welcome back to our weekly Nessa comment roundup!
I figured I might as well name these massive answer posts at last lol.
Lets get into it shall we? :)
She's clinging on to her sanity desperately but lets be honest Hannah's been struggling with that for a while now.
Maybe she's got off lucky?.. it's not like she's shown any signs of memory modification problems like unstable memories, headaches or constantly spacing out so she can sort events into some kind of sense within her own mind and.. oh.. :(
I'd definitely lean towards reverse entropy more then fiddling with time.
Can you imagine how many complicated components and power a spell would need to change time of all things?
The one thing you did skip over there was the magic though :)
Conjuration is a thing after all which kind of breaks science in general usually.
If magic can make something from nothing just by adding power imagine what else it could do?
All it would need is some kind of direction from the caster to tell it what result it should take the form of and a hell of a lot of power lol.
The person who knows best is Edith and getting a straight answer out of her can be a bit.. well.. she's Edith, lets leave it at that :)
Not to sound silly or anything but I've got to admit my breath hitched a little when I got to the 'I want Sarah' line too Amy.
The instant it was done my first reaction was 'I need to take a break'.
Poor poor Hannah, maybe some day she'll get a break too?
I'm glad you all enjoyed the new chapter at least.
For the people catching up with us and leaving comments too, if/when you get to this point thank you and sorry I've not answered them yet.
While it's tempting to leave answers as you progress up the story I'm kind of reluctant to pad out my comment numbers with my own words lol.
Side note, the other day I made a single file with all the posted chapters so far in it to make fact checking easier as I go on.
It turns out the story's currently up to just over 240,000 words posted, with roughly another 50,000 already written!
So congrat's to all of you that have stuck in there and come along for the journey with Hannah so far :)
It kind of blew my mind a little seeing that.
It feels like only yesterday I spent an afternoon being calmed down by Rasufelle before finally clicking the save button on the first chapter while trying to not panic over it all lol
Nessa
oh no ! I ran out of story
what to do what to do ???? oh boy I hope there is more soon .
Stephen J
Congrat's Stephen :)
Well done catching up! lol.
New chapters are usually out on Mondays so only a few days to go until the next one at least :)