Is really nice. All too often authors skimp on it and then I lose interest.

You write interesting stories and I've enjoyed a few of them. The only thing that really puts me off, and it's really just a question of personal taste, is that the TG character always seems to end up a straight girl. I'm trying not to go into a rant here, but I'll just say that I'm usually hugely disappointed with this because it seems like all the stories worth reading these days--those that are interesting, have a plot, and are well written--always seem to end up that way and the more often I encounter it the more disappointed I get. ^_^; I prefer the character to end up a lesbian, or at the very least bi and I wish there were more stories like this one where it goes down that way.

Okay, that said, I do have a legitimate critique. You say you pride yourself on your dialogue, and it's not bad at all, however, my suggestion is that you learn proper punctuation. It will make your dialogue flow much better and it will be easier to read. Here's an example...

"He went to the store," she said.

"He went to the store!" she shouted.

"He went to the store?" she asked.

"He went to the store," she replied, "to get a gallon of milk."

Also, of course, there's only one speaker per paragraph of dialogue and it's helpful if that speaker is named as such so there's no confusion about who's speaking.

I'm not trying to be all grammar nazi on you, but proper punctuation and formatting can go a long way toward maximizing someone's reading experience and their enjoyment of your story. This is somewhere you can improve a lot.

Thanks for sharing. =D